alice93 Posted July 7, 2011 Report Posted July 7, 2011 Aww no, I actually feel sorry for Cheryl. She seemed like an okay mother for a while. 'She smelt a little like fish, but that was Cheryl and he didn’t care.' Haha, I don't know why but this made me laugh Loved the introduction of 'PeeWee' in the last chapter, and seeing how he got his name haha. I love how much humility you're putting into these characters - if that makes sense. Loved it, update soon! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 8, 2011 Author Report Posted July 8, 2011 Love how you introduced Tegan in that chapter. That was very well written & I loved the character interaction. Beautifully written, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Arielxo Posted July 8, 2011 Report Posted July 8, 2011 Loved it. Cant wait to see how you progress Brax and Tegans relationship Quote
ldscott Posted July 9, 2011 Report Posted July 9, 2011 just caught up on the last few chapters! Love the intro of Vanessa as well as Teagan! Can't wait to read more! Lisa x Quote
soph1303 Posted July 9, 2011 Report Posted July 9, 2011 Just caught up on the last two chapters, great stuff . Liking how you're introducing Teagan into this story, and I loved how Brax was jealous (2 chapters ago) of the members of the Summer Bay house. Nice touch with Vanessa hiring Brax to mow her lawns. More soon please . Quote
elikell Posted July 9, 2011 Report Posted July 9, 2011 Just caught up with the last two chapters. I'm very glad that Brax found a job to help with the expenses around the house while his mother went out drinking. Loved that he was jealous almost of the happiness in the Caravan Park house. Makes Brax a normal kid! Little Casey is so cute and I feel a little sorry for Heath, poor little bloke. Loved Brax taking his shirt off and the girls watching in the window. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 10, 2011 Author Report Posted July 10, 2011 That was amazing. An absolutely fantastic update. Loved the character interaction & portrayal of everyone. Very well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
alice93 Posted July 10, 2011 Report Posted July 10, 2011 Aw, I love how Brax is so obviously clueless about his little admirer Tegan's really annoying. And poor Heath, feeling ignored I feel sorry for Heath in the show, too. Loved it, hope you update soon! Quote
Inactive User Posted July 11, 2011 Report Posted July 11, 2011 Great fanfiction! Liking it so far! Update soon xx Quote
Allways-smiling Posted July 16, 2011 Report Posted July 16, 2011 Omg I love this story Please update soon, your a really talented writer Love Brax <3 Quote
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