elikell Posted July 19, 2011 Report Posted July 19, 2011 Awesome way to introduce Fitzy. Can't wait to see what happens between them. Love Brax's thoughts throughout this chapter. Really helps give me an image od him as a youngster. And cute little Casey. He's just adorable! Looking forward to reading what happens next. Update soon please Quote
soph1303 Posted July 19, 2011 Report Posted July 19, 2011 Fitzy!! Great idea . At first I thought it might have been Charlie who was the new girl, but I think that was more wishful thinking !! Great chapter more soon please!! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Posted July 19, 2011 Nice portrayal of characters there once again. That chapter was very well written. I am enjoying this fic so far. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
elikell Posted July 20, 2011 Report Posted July 20, 2011 Another interesting chapter. I'm very glad that Mac got what he deserved. I just hope now that he leaves the Braxtons alone! Very amused at Brax trying to drive the car. Love this story immensely. Update soon please Quote
Arielxo Posted July 20, 2011 Report Posted July 20, 2011 Aww.. Casey sounds too cute!(: And Braxy with a girlfriend, wonder what Tegan's got planned. Feeling really sorry for Cheryl. Violence against women, Australia says NO. Fantastically written, can't wait for more Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Posted July 20, 2011 That was another great chapter. Well written to & character portrayal was fantastic. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
soph1303 Posted July 21, 2011 Report Posted July 21, 2011 Great chapter. Lol at Brax trying to drive though I'm also glad that Mac got what he deserved. And I wonder what Teagan will do next to try and win over Brax. More soon please :)/ Quote
Allways-smiling Posted July 21, 2011 Report Posted July 21, 2011 Another great chapter! Omg Casey so cute Brax is a total cutie too, him trying to drive funny as, and poor Cheryl even though she's not best mum! Happy Mac Got what he deserved I'd do the same if it was me Update soon. Quote
Allways-smiling Posted July 21, 2011 Report Posted July 21, 2011 Love how Heath wanted to help Update soon! I love your story just saying :L Quote
elikell Posted July 22, 2011 Report Posted July 22, 2011 Nice update. Love Heath wanting to help, even though it was illegal! lol. Little Casey is too cute. And his innocence is a nice touch to the story. Love this. Can't wait to see where you take it. Update soon please Quote
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