Arielxo Posted July 22, 2011 Report Posted July 22, 2011 (edited) Interesting that it was Heath's idea to get involved with the drugs. Awesome chapter!(: Edited July 22, 2011 by Arielxo Quote
soph1303 Posted July 23, 2011 Report Posted July 23, 2011 Aww he split up with Fitzy - I knew it was going to happen but still Interesting that was Heath's idea to get into selling drugs. Its nice that he wanted to help but I wish it was more of a legal way to help. More soon please!! Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted July 23, 2011 Report Posted July 23, 2011 Sorry for not commenting on this fan fiction sooner. I think it's amazing and I can't wait for your next update. You have all the characters perfected and you make them say what I imagine they would have said in that situation. It's so sweet that Brax is looking after his family and Casey sounds really cute. It's good of Heath to help with the money making. If only there was a better way to do it though. Cheryl needs to look out for her family more and be a more responsible parent. Teagan will be happy when she finds out Brax and Fitzy have split up. Please update soon! xx Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 (edited) Fantastic chapter! You describe Teagan so well I can't wait for more! Please update soon xx Edited July 24, 2011 by Chickiboomxx Quote
Arielxo Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 I love the relationship between Brax and Casey. It's so sweet Can't wait for the next chapter and seeing where you're going to take this story. Quote
elikell Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Another wonderful update. You've written everyone so well and I love it. You've certainly created something different here! Love the brotherly bond between all three of them, but especially Brax and little Casey, who is just so cute! Update soon please Quote
soph1303 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Another great update. Looks like Teagan is manipulative even as a kid. Wonder who Brax's new girlfriend is. More soon please Quote
Allways-smiling Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Brax is adorable I want him to be my big brother Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Posted July 24, 2011 Aww, Brax is so lovely in this fic. Another great update. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted July 25, 2011 Report Posted July 25, 2011 Great Chapter! I actually felt a little sorry for Teagan in this chapter. Nice of her to kiss Heath even though it probably didn't mean anything. Looking forward to more! x Quote
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