soph1303 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Posted July 25, 2011 Great chapter, I'm actually sort of liking Teagan a bit more (I did say sort of) in this chapter. As soon as she asked Heath if he had ever been kissed, I knew that she was going to kiss him More soon please Quote
mft Posted July 25, 2011 Report Posted July 25, 2011 great chapter. I'm loving the friendship between Heath and Tegan Quote
elikell Posted July 25, 2011 Report Posted July 25, 2011 Another great chapter! Love the cuteness of Teagan. And the boys finding a place for their illegal activities...Very interesting. I'm glad that they're helping with the household payments and things. Cheryl seems completely oblivious to any wrong-doing. Can't wait to see how the characters develop. Update soon please Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Posted July 26, 2011 I'm so sorry. I did read this but never got round to commenting. I loved it. Character interaction & portrayal of emotions was just amazing, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
elikell Posted July 27, 2011 Report Posted July 27, 2011 Oh wow, wondering how Heath will react to that! As long as he doesn't catch them red-handed he might be okay...but not likely. I'm glad that Teagan got her feelings out there. And the tattoo appearing, nice Loving this story and how its written. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Posted July 27, 2011 Aaah, I am loving this story so far. I look forward to more ... & seeing what happens next after that. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted July 28, 2011 Report Posted July 28, 2011 Great Chapter! Knew Teagan and Brax were going to have to get together eventually even though I don't like Teagan. I like it how you made Brax get the Blood And Sand tattoo as well Looking forward to more xx Quote
elikell Posted July 29, 2011 Report Posted July 29, 2011 Very amusing. Little Casey being clueless to what was really going on was so cute. He seems so small and fresh in a pretty rough world. Brax and Teagan...interesting. Still waiting for Heath's reaction. Certainly won't be good! Love this story a lot and can't wait to see where you take it next. Update soon please Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted July 29, 2011 Report Posted July 29, 2011 Aww love this chapter! Casey sounds so cute Looking forward to more! x Quote
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