Arielxo Posted August 1, 2011 Report Posted August 1, 2011 Fantastic Update! Why hello Johnny Cooper; - Love the use of old characters. Looking forward to more Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Posted August 1, 2011 Aww I am feeling sorry for Brax actually. Brilliantly written though, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
elikell Posted August 1, 2011 Report Posted August 1, 2011 Nice use of old and new characters. Johhny Cooper and Darryl Braxton...very interesting indeed Poor Brax feeling guilty at the end of the chapter. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Update soon please Quote
Allways-smiling Posted August 2, 2011 Report Posted August 2, 2011 Love it, especially the way you betray Brax character Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Posted August 2, 2011 Brilliant portrayal of Brax & Tegan there. Well done & very well written. Love Carina xxx Quote
ldscott Posted August 2, 2011 Report Posted August 2, 2011 Ooh- love that you've brought an evil brother in for Teagan! Can't wait to see what happens next! Lisa x Quote
elikell Posted August 3, 2011 Report Posted August 3, 2011 Wonderful update, as usual! Love that you're bringing Teagan's past into it. Can't wait to see what she does next. I wish Brax would just tell her how he feels... Looking forward to seeing where you take this next. Update soon please Quote
soph1303 Posted August 3, 2011 Report Posted August 3, 2011 Great update. Liked this line "There was no denying it; Teagan Callaghan was every guy’s dream. Just not Brax’s" and this one "As usual, Brax didn’t repeat the romantic phrase back to her." a lot . Because Brax will only ever love Charlie!!! Ooh Teagan has an evil brother! Could be interesting More soon please Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted August 3, 2011 Report Posted August 3, 2011 Great chapter! I like the fact that Brax likes Teagan but not really in the same way, she does to him. Really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx Quote
Arielxo Posted August 3, 2011 Report Posted August 3, 2011 Woah wasn't expecting that! Such a clever twist - Tegan and Grant. Poor Tegan for witnessing that. Love that Charlie is on Brax's mind even though they haven't even meet yet. 'Although he had never met this girl, he wished he could erase all her heartbreak and make her whole again' - One day Brax, one day Great update .. I look forward to more Quote
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