elikell Posted July 19, 2011 Report Posted July 19, 2011 Nice twist in there. Very much looking forward to seeing what Charlie does next! The jury is still out on Sophia for me. She seemed okay until she said that last bit to Charlie. I'm not sure about Sophia yet. She's certainly an interesting character! Please update soon
Angel90 Posted July 20, 2011 Report Posted July 20, 2011 I dont know how i feel abou Sophia... I mean she thinks of Charlie as another of his fathers toys... and she tells Charlie which is horriable however Charlie shouldnt have left he is in hospital for god fake... Cant wait for the next chapter.... Update soon plz
Melbelle94 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Posted July 25, 2011 Thank you for all your comments, they mean so much. Sorry this chapter took so long, but I hope you enjoy it!! ~**~ Walking towards her dad’s hospital room Sophia could see that everyone had chosen to go home and that left her to have some time with her father. Opening the door a fraction she could see the motionless figure of her father, he was asleep. Soph knew this must be stressful on him knowing his girlfriend was out there somewhere, not knowing whether she would be coming back. But with the words she had said to Charlie, she just knew the young cop would be back but not for long. Sophia knew the words she used had hurt the young woman badly, but she didn’t care! She only wanted Charlie around long enough for her father to be released from hospital. Walking into the room she took a seat by her father’s bed, she knew he deserved to have a life but she didn’t want it to be with Charlie. Her father has always had other women in his life but none of them had ever stayed long enough to speak more than hello to her. She was her father’s only girl, she always thought she was her father’s number one priority, she knew that even when he became the leader of the Riverboys, she would still be the most important thing, and she was never worried. But now with Charlie on the scene she was beginning to worry, why did her father love Charlie? She is a cop, a Braxton and a Buckton could never be together! It is well impossible. ~**~ Brax awoke to see the figure of his daughter sitting next to the bed, she had left suddenly before slipping out when no one was watching. Brax knew that Charlie needed her space and that was why she had left, Brax knew that everyone had gone home to rest and freshen up. But Soph where had she gone? She didn’t know how to get anywhere! “Hey daddy” Brax’s frown turned into a smile, when he heard the voice of his baby girl. “Hi sweetie, where did you go?” Sophia looked toward the floor, and Brax knew his only child was hiding something. “Baby, where did you go?” “Know where daddy, I just needed to get some air. This has all been such a drama, and I was just so scared of losing you, it’s just such a blessing to have you back” Brax smiled at his daughter and put a hand over hers. “You will never lose me, I am always here kiddo. Now how about you tell me all about school and well everything” Sophia smiled and climbed up on the bed next to her father, and started to tell him all about school. ~**~ After Sophia had left Charlie hadn’t known what to do, she had sat back on the rock and started thinking about things all over again. Was she really another of Brax’s toys? Was that all she was to him? It was a long thinking process but in the end Charlie had come back to where she needed to be in the hospital, to see the man she loved. She knew they would need to talk but that was what she was willing to do, she wanted to find out why he didn’t tell her something so important. When Charlie walked through the hospital room door, she was met with Brax’s eyes, those eyes she fell in love with, but then she saw the sight of Sophia in the corner. She didn’t want to see that particular teenager again, not after what she said. Charlie didn’t understand why the young girl had said those things, why did the young girl hate Charlie when really she didn’t know her. She casted her eyes back towards Brax; he was looking back at her with those big blue eyes. Charlie watched as his fingers moved motioning towards the chair beside the bed, the one Sophia had sat in previously. She slowly walked over to the chair, pausing for second before sitting gently. Charlie looked down at her feet instead of looking Brax in the eyes she didn’t think she could. She didn’t know if she could trust what his eyes would be saying, or if she would melt at the sight of those same eyes. “Charlie, please look at me” Brax pleaded with the girl he loved, Charlie raised her head but not to meet Brax’s eyes. “Charlie please, I only want to talk. I want to be able to see your eyes baby” Charlie gulped a little and raised her head to look into the big blue eyes of Brax, he wasn’t wearing his usual signature smirk and he wasn’t smiling, he was simply looking scared and worried. “Brax” Charlie let the name escape her lips, she was frozen looking at the sight of Brax. “Charlie, I’m so sorry baby. Please let me explain this all to you please Charlie, I need a chance to explain” Charlie let a little simple smile play on her lips, she had to admit to herself she was always going to give Brax a chance to explain, she didn’t want to lose him as she loved him so much. “Darryl I am always willing to give you a chance to explain, I want to hear all about this so then I can make a decision for myself” Brax nodded towards Charlie and took in a deep breath. “When I was very young I thought I was in love, coming from rough backgrounds me and a girl thought we were in love. So it was only natural that we thought we should take the next step in our relationship and that was when she fell pregnant” Brax took a deep breath and looked over towards his sleeping daughter. “My girlfriend back then didn’t want to be pregnant; she didn’t want to have a child. We were both so young and she didn’t want to be a mother. We went through a lot of fighting between both us and our parents, she didn’t want the child and I did. I convinced her that the baby was important and apart of us; still she seemed to be struggling and told me she wanted to get rid of the baby. I wouldn’t let her and finally after even more fighting she gave in, and we made a deal, if she gave birth to the child I was to raise it on my own, I accepted the deal and after Sophia was born she left, I didn’t blame her I knew she wasn’t ready what I chose to do was just a choice. I knew that even though Sophia wasn’t born yet I still loved the child this girl was carrying” Charlie looked at Brax and saw a tear begin to slide down his cheek, reaching out her hand to wiped the tear away and smiled softly. “You need to tell me why you chose not to tell me of your daughter” Brax looked at Charlie’s eyes and thought it was best to tell her the truth. “I didn’t think this would work at first, a Riverboy and a cop I just didn’t think it was possible. When Soph was little she used to watch me bring home different girls and I didn’t want to put her through it again, I was trying to straighten my life out after all. Charlie I didn’t want to hurt you, but I didn’t want to hurt Sophia, you have to understand that” Charlie looked at Brax and got up off the chair to give him a big hug. “I love you Brax more than I ever thought I would, I love you from now until forever” ~**~ Next Chapter: * Is that Brax getting out of hospital? * How is Sophia reacting to having Charlie around? * What does Ruby think of Casey’s niece?
Dingo x Posted July 25, 2011 Report Posted July 25, 2011 Great chapter. Can't wait for more, Update soon. xx
elikell Posted July 26, 2011 Report Posted July 26, 2011 Great update. Love that Charlie came back to the hospital and heard Brax out. I just hope that Sophia doesn't ruin it for them both. Lovely emotions in this update. Can't wait to see where you take this next and how Sophia will react to everyone... Update soon please
soph1303 Posted July 26, 2011 Report Posted July 26, 2011 Great update. Glad that Charlie gave Brax a chance to explain and that she listened to what he had to say. Wonder how Sophia will react to all this. More soon please
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 26, 2011 Report Posted July 26, 2011 Nice character interaction there, especially between Charlie & Brax. Written fantastically. Well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx
Chickiboomxx Posted July 26, 2011 Report Posted July 26, 2011 I have only just started reading this fan fic but I really like it! The previews are very good too, keeping you guessing. Looking forward to more! Please update soon xx
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