Sabrina Posted July 16, 2011 Report Posted July 16, 2011 Fantastic updates! Chapter 4 - I can't believe Angelo demanded proof that Charlie is pregnant. I don't think it's a good idea for Charlie to even have one drink. Chapter 5 - I don't think Charlie drinking so much or kissing Brax is a good idea. Chapter 6 - Loved how worried Ruby was of Charlie. Charlie and Brax slept together?! Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 16, 2011 Report Posted July 16, 2011 Poor Charlie. She needs to sort out her life at the moment though ... which is going to be tough. Loved Ruby at the start & their relationship. Fantastic character interaction. Well written, once again. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted July 17, 2011 Report Posted July 17, 2011 Liked Ruby acting like the mother at the beginning Nicole just go away now Charlie needs to sort it out its not fair on her baby Bring on the next chapter Quote
Zetti Posted July 18, 2011 Report Posted July 18, 2011 Charlie has been through a lot. Nicole was really childish. Hope to see more soon. Quote
soph1303 Posted July 18, 2011 Report Posted July 18, 2011 Wow - Charlie slept with Brax - yay!! She needs to sort out the whole drinking thing though before something seriously bad happens. Nicole needs to grow up, of course Angelo is going to want to stay if Charlie is pregnant with his baby, it doesn't mean that he cares any less about her or George, but it is his baby and he has the right to want to be in it's life. Hopefully between Ruby, Leah and Bianca they will be able to help Charlie. Update soon please - I want to find out more!!! Quote
Deano Posted July 20, 2011 Report Posted July 20, 2011 Sorry Danni I just came across this fanfiction it is so amazing that i am speechless -How could Angelo do that -Glad he doesn't want to move -Hope Charlie has the baby - Brax and Charlie <3 Quote
Angel90 Posted July 20, 2011 Report Posted July 20, 2011 Oh just caught up on the story... Arrrrrr i cant stand Nic and Angelo!!!! Great chapter... more plz... Quote
Guest Posted July 20, 2011 Report Posted July 20, 2011 Wow Danni great fan fic I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 20, 2011 Report Posted July 20, 2011 Don't know why you were worried about that chapter, I loved it!The chat between Charlie and Bianca was great and I loved the scene between Angelo and Nicole and I'm glad they both seem to have accepted the situation now.Looking forward to more! Quote
mft Posted July 20, 2011 Report Posted July 20, 2011 I love this fiction although I still can not stand nicole Quote
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