helen2289 Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 I don't normally comment but I always read the updates. I keep reading and hoping that Brax comes back! Quote
Inactive User Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 Amazing update Well done! Update soon xx Quote
JosieTash Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 REALLY liked that, especially ,,,,,, “Good, me too” Ryan said. “So, where you taking me? Paris....Milan?” Ryan laughed. “I was thinking maybe dinner at my place? Although, actually, I don’t want to put you through my cooking, so maybe not” Charlie laughed. She smiled as she saw Bianca lying on the couch, with Jacob lying on top of her, both of them sound asleep, Bianca’s arm wrapped protectively around the young boy, Jacob tightly clutching onto his little blankie. “Mmm hmm....you kissed him, didn’t you Buckton?” Bianca asked. “A little goodnight kiss might have happened” Charlie said casually. “He’s so nice, but he’s not....well he’s not Brax” “No no” Bianca shook her head “We’re not going there Charlie, okay. Yes, I know Ryan isn’t Brax. It’s not going to be the same. The dates, kissing, the sex, because he is a different person. Charlie if you are going to date this guy and try to move on then you can’t compare him to Brax” Taking a deep breath, she’d come to her decision. She hit the delete button and watched as the picture disappeared, being replaced by a picture of Ruby holding a new-born Jacob. Quote
soph1303 Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 Great few updates, So Ryan seems nice enough I guess, if not slightly presumptuous and showy off! Sorry, I guess that's the Chax part of me talking !! Good advice from Bianca once again. More soon please Quote
callyha Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 I've missed a great few updates here Danni! Loved them and how descriptive you've been, especially the dates because we all know Charlie misses Brax. Ryan does sound nice, be he is no Brax, but if Brax ain't coming back, maybe Charlie should let herself 'fall' completely for Ryan.......(don't really want that to happen, Charlie HAS TO be with Brax lol) Loved the imagery of Jacob asleep on Bianca, who was also asleep Keep going Danni, this is amazing work and I love reading! (Even though I'm not commenting as regular as I used to.....my bad) Quote
Lucii Posted November 20, 2011 Author Report Posted November 20, 2011 Charlie and Ryan sound really cute together However he is no Brax! Jacob is sooo sweet! And Bianca's hilarious update soon xx Quote
once_upon_a_mind Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 Just read the three updates I missed. Interesting, still patiently waiting for Brax's grand re-entrance in this fic though haha. Hmm, I wonder if Casey will mention to Brax about seeing Charlie on a date? Update soon please! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 Nice chat between Charlie and Bianca again, Bianca gave good advice.Looking forward to more! Quote
totally Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 I know the title is 'Nothing lasts forever', but Charlie and Brax are just meant to be together... forever. Ryan is really nice, but I barely got through them kissing... I hope there is not much more in store for them. I hope that when Brax gets out, he fights for Charlie and their family. I don't know what will happen next, but I can't wait to find out! I love this story so much Danni! Quote
pembie Posted November 20, 2011 Report Posted November 20, 2011 Really Good updates I think its funny how everyone is begging you to bring Brax back I'm sure he will pop up again sometime. Quote
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