callyha Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 Nice update! Angelo, you either stop taunting Charlie with the fact that Jacob is with you or I'll punch you! And don't get involved in this situation, you'll make things worse, not better! Love Morag been back and helping Charlie and giving Angelo a piece of her mind! Brax, doing all he can to help Charlie Update soon please Danni Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 I'm not convinced Charlie and Morag have done the right thing by keeping the police out of it.Not sure Angelo's doing the right thing getting involved either, although Morag wasn't being entirely fair on him and he did seem fairly reasonable towards Charlie that time round.Looking forward to more. Quote
once_upon_a_mind Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 Great couple of updates! Grr Angelo is annoying me! I hope Ruby is back safe soon and then they can work on getting Jacob back! Update soon please x Quote
soph1303 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 Great few updates, Feel so sorry for Charlie!!! Oh my god! Not only is Angelo the most self centered person ever, he's also the dumbest!! More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 Great chapter I think Xavier's right. Charlie should have called the police. Whoa at the ending! Wonder who is shot? I bet it's Angelo.... I don't care if it's him shot coz I don't like him in this fanfiction Update soon xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 I think Xavier probably did the right thing going to the police.Hammer being worried about Ruby deteriorating was a nice touch.I'm worried about the ending, I think it might be Angelo as well but I hope it isn't, he doesn't deserve to die because of Brax's mess.Looking forward to more. Quote
callyha Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 Hmm, that ending sounds a bit...... what's the word..... I think it could be Angelo Hammer becoming worried over Ruby getting worse was actually a weirdly nice change, shame it was just a tad too late.... she should be alright -Here's hoping- Update soon please Danni, this was great Quote
once_upon_a_mind Posted November 5, 2011 Report Posted November 5, 2011 Great update! Hmm I'm guessing it's Angelo who got shot but a part of me is saying Casey. Ok update soon please!! Great story! Quote
cablove Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 (edited) I reckon Brax to be honest. Maybe Angelo. Very good chapter. Hope Chax end up together. Poor Ruby and Casey, hope they get back together. Update soon. xxx Edited November 6, 2011 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG! Quote
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