Shezza Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 I think maybe it is Brax who gets shot but he won't die. Great Chapter I wasn't so sure I liked this story with Angelo in it. But the more I read now the more I want to read. It has turned into a story I love now and have to come back and read. Great writing. Can't wait to see who got shot Quote
pembie Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 Sorry I havent commented for ages I was in hospital. What fantastic updates to catch up on lots for plot twist its just all been really exciting stuff to read Jacob being taken away was everyone fault in a way all expect for Charlie I would say, but I think it is mostly Brax to blame. I fear it might be Angelo shot at the end of the last chapter here. Hope not althrough he might of gone about some things wrong his only had Charlie and Jacob's Interests at heart. I quite like him in this story. I also like the way Charlie sticks up to Brax in this story. Quote
soph1303 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 Wow great update, It was interesting to read a slightly nicer side to Hammer over the whole Ruby thing. Shame that it was too late to do any good. Wow at the ending!! I actually think that Hammer shot Heath not Angelo, coz Heath was being so cocky towards him!! More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 Yay you updated! Glad Charlie and Ruby sorted things out Can't wait for them to be reunited with Jacob soon Good thing Angelo apologized for everything and glad that he wanted Charlie to get Jacob back. Whoa at the ending! Wonder how will Nicole react to the news about Angelo...? Update soon xx Quote
Samantha28 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 Really, really, really great chapter. Actually sad that he died, and the poor family... Glad Ruby's okay. Hope Chax can sort things out. Looking forward to more! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 Oh no.I really didn't want Angelo to die, although I'm glad he got that last moment with Charlie. What'll happen to Jacob now, at least until Charlie's okay to have him again-will Nicole continue to look after him or will he have to go into care?Glad Ruby's okay and Charlie's sticking to her guns over Brax.Looking forward to more. Quote
totally Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 I liked it! I am glad Ruby and Charlie talked things true. Not sad about Angelo dying, really not. Sorry for Jacob though, he will need a father. My only wish is that Charlie and Brax make up, but I guess that will be hard after everything that has happened. Oh, and I don't want Brax to go jail. I loved it, I can't wait to read more! Thank you for this! Quote
Deano Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 Oh My I haven't posted anything in a while. Angelo dead. , I liked his bad side oh well good updates Quote
callyha Posted November 6, 2011 Report Posted November 6, 2011 Great chapter Danni! Glad Charlie and Ruby have spoken and have decided to put this behind them and focus on the future and the three of them been a family I do hope Jacob goes back to Charlie, and it should be because of a mistake that was made, not because the father of the baby is dead. Nicole will be crushed when she finds out I love how Ruby is still trying to get Charlie to get back together with Brax But a stint in jail is what's needed, if nothing to punish him for having Jacob taken away from Charlie Update soon please Danni, this is great! Quote
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