once_upon_a_mind Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 Great update. I'm wondering what will happen with Jacob now that Angelo has died. They shouldn't leave him with Nicole, she's not related to him. But if they put him in foster care, that would be horrible. Loved the Charlie/Ruby part at the end. Looking forward to teh next update! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 Whilst I was kind of hoping Nicole and Charlie would be there for each other and I hope they make up at some point, I'm kind of glad Nicole said what she did because Angelo was the innocent person in that room and just trying to help Ruby.But the only thing Charlie really did wrong was fall in love with Brax without knowing what he was like.Hope Ruby listens to Casey and tries to be a friend to Nicole.Not sure how I want the teen love triangle to go:I like both Casey and Xavier and will feel sorry for either of them if they lose out but it was wrong of Casey to kiss Ruby and tell Xavier they were getting back together. This fic is really making me think so it must be good!Looking forward to more. Quote
Sazzle Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 Really great last few updates! Was surprised that Angelo died but if he didn't involve himself so much and snoop about then he would have been fine. Hope Charlie gets her little man back soon without too much hassle from Nicole - I do feel sad for Nic but she shouldn't put it on Charlie. Really enjoying your writing! Thanks for sharing and looking forward to next update Quote
totally Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 This was so sad for Nicole. I hope she is being honest about Jacob belonging with Charlie. I hope Charlie gets Jacob back soon, for good. Poor Charlie when she almost mentioned Brax when she was talking of her family. Charlie deserves to be happy after everything she has been through, I hope she gets it soon. I can't wait to read more, thank you so much for this update! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 I loved that last bit, with Nicole bringing Jacob round to Charlie.I guess they've both been hurt by all this.Looking forward to more. Quote
Shezza Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 Lovely interaction between Charlie and Jacob. Poor Nicole I actually felt really sorry for her I hope Charlie gets Jacob back really soon. Great Writing Quote
Guest Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 Great update Danni please update again soon Quote
~Zoe~ Posted November 7, 2011 Report Posted November 7, 2011 (edited) Great update Danni, update again soon. Edited November 8, 2011 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
Inactive User Posted November 8, 2011 Report Posted November 8, 2011 Great chapter More soon xx Quote
soph1303 Posted November 8, 2011 Report Posted November 8, 2011 Great update, Haha loved impatient Charlie at the start !! Totally understand why she was though. Aww Charlie bonding with Jacob was so sweet !! Glad that Jane is nice and thinks that Charlie will get Jacob back! Aww felt so sorry for Nic at the end! But I'm worried that Charlie will get in trouble if she takes Jacob!! More soon please Quote
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