Lucii Posted November 10, 2011 Author Report Posted November 10, 2011 Poor Charlie and Ruby! I hope it all workds out for them in the end! Great chapter update soon x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 10, 2011 Report Posted November 10, 2011 Liked the opening bit between Ruby and Xavier, I think Xavier's possibly being too hard but I can see his point of view and Ruby does need to close off her feelings with Casey before starting anything else.The Charlie/Brax scene was nicely written and nice title drop in there.Wondering what Brax is going to do to try and win her back.Looking forward to more. Quote
cablove Posted November 10, 2011 Report Posted November 10, 2011 (edited) Love this chapter it was great. Wonder what Brax is up to? Who does Ruby love Casey or Xavier? lol Update soon. Edited November 11, 2011 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
once_upon_a_mind Posted November 10, 2011 Report Posted November 10, 2011 Aww they've all been left heartbroken! Is Brax going to turn himself in to the cops? Looking forward to the next capter! Quote
Guest Posted November 10, 2011 Report Posted November 10, 2011 Great update please update again soon Quote
pembie Posted November 11, 2011 Report Posted November 11, 2011 Oh my everyone is left heartbroken The Charlie and Brax scene was really good. I hope Brax hands himself into the cops to win Charlie back anything esle wouldn't prove his love for her. Well done on this Fantastic story Quote
Inactive User Posted November 11, 2011 Report Posted November 11, 2011 Great chapter More soon xx Quote
soph1303 Posted November 11, 2011 Report Posted November 11, 2011 Great update, Aww that chapter was heartbreaking for so many reasons - Xav and Ruby and Charlie and Brax!! Expecially the Chax bit !! More soon please Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 11, 2011 Report Posted November 11, 2011 Glad that Brax and Heath did the right thing and turned themselves in, although they didn't really have much choice.Loved Charlie stopping Ruby using the phone and then getting a call from the double glazing salesman.(Doesn't that always happen?)Glad Charlie's got Jacob back.Looking forward to seeing where you go with this now! Quote
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