Inactive User Posted November 11, 2011 Report Posted November 11, 2011 Great chapter Glad Brax and Heath turned theirselves into the police. I wonder if they may mention Casey and Ruby coz Casey knew about the drugs and got Ruby involved into helping him hide the drugs... Cracked up at Charlie and loved how she stopped Ruby from using the phone Awww the ending is so cute! Glad Charlie got Jacob back at last Quote
totally Posted November 11, 2011 Report Posted November 11, 2011 That was so lovely. I am so glad Charlie has Jacob back. I hope Brax gets out of jail soon. I can't wait to read more! Thank you for this chapter! Quote
~Zoe~ Posted November 11, 2011 Report Posted November 11, 2011 Great chapter. Glad Charlie has Jacob back Quote
Shezza Posted November 11, 2011 Report Posted November 11, 2011 Great Chapter. I hope Brax and Heath do a deal and don't go to jail. It was really great to see heath stand by his brother like that I am glad that Charlie got Jacob back. I love how Ruby wasn't aloud to use the phone. I am also enjoying Morag in this story she is great. Can't wait to read more Quote
callyha Posted November 12, 2011 Report Posted November 12, 2011 I liked the Heath and Brax scene at the beginning, strong brotherhood they got, but Brax is right; Heath has Darcy to think about Charlie got Jacob Back! Loved how she banned Ruby from using the phone and how Morag just sat there and watched i think this covers my thoughts on this chapter Danni :wub: Update soon please Danni. loved this! Quote
Sazzle Posted November 12, 2011 Report Posted November 12, 2011 Loved your last few updates! Writing has been excellent and the story is brilliant. Really felt for Brax, Charlie and Ruby and SO pleased that baby is back home. Hope that something can work out for Chax and intrigued and excited for your next update!! The conversation and honesty between characters is spot on. Thank you so much for sharing! Really great writing Quote
once_upon_a_mind Posted November 12, 2011 Report Posted November 12, 2011 Glad Charlie got Jacob back. Now to sort out the mess with Brax and Heath. I wonder what will happen with them! Quote
Guest Posted November 12, 2011 Report Posted November 12, 2011 Great chapter please update soon Quote
soph1303 Posted November 12, 2011 Report Posted November 12, 2011 Aww Great chapter, Glad that Brax and Heath are giving themselves in. I don't want them to go to jail, but its the right thing to do and probably the only way that Charlie might ever forgive Brax! Nervous Charlie was funny but sweet in that chapter !! Aww the ending was so cute !! More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted November 12, 2011 Report Posted November 12, 2011 Great chapter. Enjoying it so far Update soon xx Quote
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