Red Ranger 1 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 Nice update.Jacob was really cute, I loved all the interaction between him and Charlie.Hmm, 17 months later?Why do I get the feeling Brax and Heath are about to be released? Quote
pembie Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 Jacob made me smile in this chapter the scene with Bianca reading his book was really good. Has Brax and Heath really been gone for 17 months didn't realise that. Update soon Quote
Inactive User Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 Wow 17 months had passed! But great chapter More soon please xx Quote
soph1303 Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 Great update, Guessing from the 17 months later bit, that Heath and Brax are going to be out soon ... just as the girls are possibly about to move on !! Aww Jacob was so cute in that update !! Loved all his interactions with Charlie and with his Aunty Bianca!! Speed dating.... hmm. I'll save judgement until after they've done the speed dating!! More soon please Quote
Sazzle Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 "I hope this next one is okay" - Seriously Danni....your writing is excellent! Loving this story! Obviously I am very much hoping that Brax can get his woman back somehow in the end but I am loving the journey anyhow. Sorry I've not commented on last few chapters! They are fab and thank you for sharing and updating so frequently Quote
Sazzle Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 Thank you for updating again so quickly! Feel spoilt!! Love the awkwardness and the weird blokes!! Could totally sense how much they were freaking her out, lol! Glad that one actually seems decent but think her mind is still occupied with someone else... Can't wait to see how this develops - Still hoping and looking forward to conversation between her and Brax though - hoping for it anyway... Really great, fun chapter! Thanks Quote
Shezza Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 Great Chapter but I was hoping Brax was going to be there somewhere oh well I am sure he will show up sooner or later. I really enjoy reading this story can't wait for more Quote
totally Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 Aw no, don't move on now Charlie. I am sure Brax will be back soon. I so hope she isn't ready to move on yet. I loved the awkward dates, those blokes were really something. Don't like Ryan, nothing personal... I just want her to be with Brax again! Thanks for this update Danni, I can't wait for the next! Please update soon! Quote
callyha Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 Danni! Loved these two chapters! Bee dragging Charlie out for speed dating Bee reading to Jake ( Abble and Zeba! soooooooo cute!) The speed dating....i did have a moment where I giggled. Going from creepy, to a drop head, to a clean freak to a virgin to someone who could be right....a good variety! lol Hmmmmm wondering what gonna happen with Ryan.....(especially with Brax due for parole any time soon...) Update soon Danni! please Quote
~Zoe~ Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 Enjoyed the chapter Danni, good stuff. Quote
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