Nothing Lasts Forever (by Danni02) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Looks like Charlie and Ruby have sorted things out, although there still seem to be a few bones of contention between them.Curious how her date with Ryan will go.Looking forward to more!

[~Zoe~]

Liked that chapter. More please

[pembie]

Sorry Danni had like 4 chapters to catch up on they were great loved the speed dating that was so funny with all those strange men Ryan seems ok just waiting for his hidden dark secret

Ruby's been quite annoying in the last few chapters

[JosieTash]

Just started reading this fic a few days ago. It’s like one of those books you can’t put down !!!! All I can say is, why did it take me sooooo long to start reading this story !!!! It’s AWESOME !!!!! Soooooooooo many twists & turns !!!!!!! A fantastic emotional rollercoaster !!!!! REALLY looking forward to see where it goes next !!!!

[Inactive User]

Awesome update More soon xx

[JosieTash]

LOVED that, most especially ,,,,,,

 The red strapless dress she wore, cut just above the knee, and clung in all the right places.

 “Good, because I’m under strict instruction from Ruby that I have to wear this dress” Charlie said.

 “Oi” Charlie said as she walked over to Bianca and lightly tickled Jacob’s side. “We’re going to have to teach you how to say yes” Charlie laughed as Jacob giggled.

 “Abble” Jacob smiled as he pointed to the picture. [Jacob is the CUTEST]

 “Yeah we went to the park and then we went to feed the ducks. Although I’m pretty sure at one point he didn’t say duck” Charlie said as she looked up at Ryan.

“Teaching your son explicits already?” Ryan laughed.

 Charlie smiled nervously before she picked up the glass, and tasted the wine. It was okay, but if she was going to be honest, she’d say she preferred her usual 20 dollar bottle of merlot. Not wanting to hurt Ryan feelings for paying so much for a bottle of wine, she didn’t particularly like, she decided to say she liked it.

 “But what about Brax? You guys were prefect together”

“And who ruined that” Charlie said

 “No, he’s currently....living away from here” Charlie said and Ryan nodded.

 “So I don’t have to be worried that he’ll be your next guy? I mean you seem to like the men who own this restaurant” Ryan joked.

[totally]

I liked it! But you really keep us waiting until Brax' arrives! This is killing me!

Thank you for this lovely chapter though... I hope is not enjoying herself too much!

[Red Ranger 1]

Well, things seemed a bit awkward when Charlie was having to tell Ryan her chequered family history but they seem to be working through it.Bit worried Jacob wouldn't settle without Charlie but he seems to have taken to Bianca.Looking forward to more!

[~Zoe~]

Loved that chapter, its a great fiction.

[Sazzle]

Great updates! Loving this story and thank you for updating so often!

Really hoping that Brax is around soon. She is obviously still really cut up about him but being the properly stubborn version of herself. I know Ryan is trying to be 'sweet' and whatever but I found him annoying especially when talking about his travels...urgh...

Love the interaction between characters particularly Charlie and Jacob. Really loving your writing and story!

I was thinking...lol! ... If you are going to have this Ryan around for a bit and he gets to meet Jacob... - you'd make my day if Jacob didn't get on with him at all but then if Brax pops up Jacob is calmed by him and has good connection... Think this would be cute, haha _ I'm SO eager for Brax...I do hope he pops back up soonish...please...

Thanks for your updates! Casey mentioning Brax was nice too...