Arielxo Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Great chapter Ryan is nice and all .... but he's no Brax. Quote
soph1303 Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Great update, Haha loved Ruby's whole reaction to Charlie's date!! But me thinks that Charlie isn't quite as excited about Ryan as she should be!! Enter Brax... !! Wow Ryan was so good about Charlie's whole big revelation about Angelo and Brax!! But I agree, he seems a bit too good to be true!! Come on Brax!! Get out of jail already and win Charlie back!! More soon please Quote
soph1303 Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Great update, Miss congeniality? Pure class!! Has to be the actual best movie of all time !! Ruby talking to Jacob was so !! Very cute!! Hmm, still not made my mind up about Ryan yet!! No, screw it - Team Chax all the way !!! More soon please Quote
JosieTash Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Coooooooool !!!! Another update !!! ADORED that, especially ...... “Thought so” Ryan said. “Well there are plenty of those to choose from” Charlie gave Ryan a quizzical look. “Not that they are mines” Ryan added “Emma. A lot of these movies are hers. It’s kind of a tradition we’d sit down and watch a movie, you know movie and popcorn. It’s started off when she was a little girl. I thought as she got older she wouldn’t want to stay in and watch a movie with her father, but she still loved to do it. Sometimes we’d trade popcorn for ice-cream. So, yeah, unfortunately for me, I’ve seen a lot of rom-coms” Ryan said and Charlie laughed “But she knew it had to go both was so she’s had to sit though films full of fighting, cars, more fighting” Ryan laughed. “No, but you are a Police Sargent, so it’s in the same line of work, and well, your gorgeous so I’ve no doubt you’d win” “Well as nice as that compliment was, I don’t think beauty pageants are my style” Charlie said. “Maybe it’s a good thing” Ryan said “I don’t want lots of men eyeing you up. I’m kinda hoping things keep going this well with us” And you deserve a daddy too. Someone to love you and take you soccer or ballet, you know, whatever you end up liking, but you really do deserve a father. It’s not fair you’ll never remember yours. But I promise you now, the moment you want to know about him, you come to me, and I’ll tell you all about him. I promise I’ll be nice about him too” Ruby smiled as Jacob eyes fluttered lightly and his hand flew out to the side, as if reacting to a dream. “You like the movie or you like the swimsuit scene?” “I’m not gonna lie, that could be one of my favourites, but I truly do like that movie” “But mamma has met a really nice man. You never know, maybe it’ll work out, and you’ll have a Daddy. Because mamma wishes so much you had a daddy. There was one time where I thought you were the luckiest little guy ever because you had two daddies. Angelo would always be your daddy, but you would have had Brax too. But then just like that they both got taken away from you. Quote
Dingo x Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Great story Danni, been following for ages and thought I would finally comment. (: Ryan seems really nice but still want Chax back together (: and he just seems too perfect, there must be something wrong with him? Can't wait for more. xx Quote
Inactive User Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Awesome chapter Aww loved Ruby's talk to Jacob. So cute! Update soon xx Quote
once_upon_a_mind Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 (edited) Ooh aren't we lucky getting two updates so close together Hmm, I know Brax will make an entrance again sometime soon so I'm being patient. Ryan seems nice but I'm inclined to believe there is something in his closet or he is hiding something. Could he be gang related too...have something to do with Pirovic's gang? Oh now wouldn't that be a twist lol. Looking forward to more whenever you decide to post Edited November 21, 2011 by once_upon_a_mind Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 I liked Ruby's chat with Jacob too.Charlie and Ryan seem to be getting on well too, although it's probably a good idea for them to take it slow.Unlike Ruby and Xavier...Looking forward to more. Quote
ldscott Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Ooh I thought she was gonna find Ruby and Xav in the bedroom! Great chapter, love the chats that the girls have with Jacob whilst he's asleep! Can't wait to read more Lisa x Quote
~Zoe~ Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Ryan is nice but still want Chax back together! Good update Quote
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