JosieTash Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 ACE update, especially ...... Jacob reached forward and took the spoon from Charlie, wanting to feed himself. “Clever boy” Charlie looked up as she heard footsteps and whispering coming from the hall, and was shocked to hear the sound of Xavier’s voice. He’d spent the night. “I think she’s still in bed, be quick” Ruby said as pushed Xavier forward. Just as Xavier was about to open the door, Charlie spoke. “Morning” Ruby cursed under her breath as she and Xavier stood frozen, not turning around. “So, Xavier, what brings you here so early? I’m mean I know you wouldn’t have spent the night because Ruby and you both know my feelings about that” “You don’t get a punishment” Charlie said “You knowing how disappointed I am in you is enough” “I think I’d rather have the punishment” “Cookie what?” Charlie said. “Cookie cookie” Jacob said and once again Charlie laughed. “No, Jacob, what do we say?” Charlie asked. “Pwease” Jacob said as he grinned up at Charlie Jacob is SOOOOOOOO the cutest !!! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Good that Charlie didn't blow her top with Ruby.I didn't see the ending coming, at least not the way it happened.Curious to see if Brax is out.Looking forward to more. Quote
Guest Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Great updates please update again soon Quote
soph1303 Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Great update, Haha loved that Ruby was more scared of Charlie being disappointed in her than getting yelled at! Aww Jacob was cute as in that update !! OMG!! You can't leave it hanging like that !!!!! More REALLY soon please Quote
totally Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Oh my god! YAY! Brax will be back soon! I can't wait for more! Thank you for this chapter and I am super excited for the next, I hope Charlie meets Brax soon! Quote
Sazzle Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Danni I love your writing...its awesome! Thanks for last few updates...they are FABulous!! Still not loving Ryan but at least he is being nice to Charlie. Loved interaction between Charlie and her kids...I've had the "dissappointed" chat with my Mum before and its devastating Was really well written. Seriously looking forward to any Chax conversations or info...you know if you fancy that idea any time soon Really enjoying story! Thanks Quote
helen2289 Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 Dam no new chapter! Will be checking all day because I can't wait to see what happens Quote
totally Posted November 22, 2011 Report Posted November 22, 2011 I am so hooked on this story that I am commenting twice on the same chapter! I just love it! And I hope Brax is out as well... Can't wait to read more! I love this story (in case you didn't already know that). Quote
pembie Posted November 23, 2011 Report Posted November 23, 2011 Good Chapter I didnt really like Brax just turning up to see Charlie like that. I found myself agreeing with Bianca there. But sadly I can't see Charlie staying away from Brax for long Team Ryan all the way for me at the moment. Quote
Inactive User Posted November 23, 2011 Report Posted November 23, 2011 (edited) Great chapter. Liked Charlie and Bianca's friendship More soon please xx Edited November 23, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
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