pembie Posted November 24, 2011 Report Posted November 24, 2011 You didn't like that update I thought it was really good. Well after that chapter, I have now come round to the way of thinking that Charlie will end up with Brax in the end. I think she will find it to hard to fight her feeling for him. Jacob made me smile in this chapter too Quote
LaylaK Posted November 25, 2011 Report Posted November 25, 2011 Loving Jacob and glad Brax is back. I wonder how Ryan will take him being back Quote
soph1303 Posted November 26, 2011 Report Posted November 26, 2011 Great update, Ooh am I starting to sense the slightest bit of trouble in Ryan and Charlie's relationship?? Excellent !! OMG Xavier proposed and Ruby said yes!!! YES!! It sounds like Charlie's going to meet Brax !! More soon please Quote
JosieTash Posted November 26, 2011 Report Posted November 26, 2011 VERY coooooooool AND intriguing, especially ....... The WHOLE “Jacob was a little naughty this morning. He bit me” discussion “Everything alright?” Ryan asked as he saw the look on Charlie’s face. Charlie looked back up to Ryan as she exhaled. “Yeah, it was just Ruby. She’s going out with a few friends after uni, so she’s just saying she won’t be home from dinner tonight” “So, we’ll leave it a while longer before I meet the little guy” Ryan smiled, just as Annie walked back over and placed a piece of chocolate cake down on the table, before placing down two forks. “Ehm, we didn’t order this Annie” Ryan said. “I know, it’s on the house” Annie smiled “Enjoy your date” Annie said before she walked off. Charlie and Ryan laughed lightly as they both picked up a fork and dug into the cake. “Yeah good” Xavier smiled “I got out of bed around 12 and went for a surf then I got ready and came and met you” “That’s so lazy” Ruby sighed “I was at uni for 3 hours by then” “Well you get to be the brains and I get to be the hot surfer dude” “Okay, well me being the brains, I’ll agree with, but you, hot surfer dude?” Ruby shook her head and Xavier looked offended. “You know I love you” Ruby laughed. “Yes, yes, oh my God yes” Ruby squealed as Xavier put the ring on her finger, before pulling her close for a kiss. “Oh no” Dex shook his head “He’s a demon” “Excuse me?” Charlie said as she looked at Dex. “He bit me and April” Dex said. Charlie said before she ran from the house, wondering if she was making the right decision Quote
cb2180 Posted November 26, 2011 Report Posted November 26, 2011 Great chapter, glad that charlie has decided to go and see brax! Quote
Inactive User Posted November 26, 2011 Report Posted November 26, 2011 Great chapter I don't like Ryan really Because I think what he suggested about biting Jacob back is really stupid and cruel to do that to a little boy-it does sounds like child abuse to me really. Awww Xavier and Ruby engaged! Can't wait to see how Charlie reacts to it. Glad Charlie decided to go to see Brax. Can't wait to see how it goes. Update soon xx Quote
once_upon_a_mind Posted November 26, 2011 Report Posted November 26, 2011 Aww how sweet Rubes and Xav are engaged and damn gilr Charlie you are making the right decision!! Love it! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 26, 2011 Report Posted November 26, 2011 I thought at first Ryan was joking when he suggested Charlie bite Jacob but apparently he wasn't so that's a bit strange, even though I can see the logic.Not a good sign that Charlie's lying to him about Brax being back in touch as well.Amusing that Reefton Lakes has their own Colleen.Wow, Ruby and Xavier engaged!Was not expecting that. Quote
callyha Posted November 26, 2011 Report Posted November 26, 2011 Sorry Danni! I've missed some amazing updates! I love the frienddship between Charlie and Bianca, its so sweet and they are more like sisters than best friends Jacob continues to be soooo cute! missing out his R's but the biting.... oh well Ryan does sound like a real nice bloke, and the advice he is giving to Charlie is helpful (biting Jacob for example, that's good, just maybe a gummy bite not a full on one lol) Ruby and Xavier getting engaged Heath and Brax both let out! wooohoooo! Hopefully Brax can prove he's gone on the straight and narrow and hopefully reunite with Charlie Update soon please Danni, these chapters have been super! Quote
totally Posted November 26, 2011 Report Posted November 26, 2011 I don't like Ryan, there is something wrong with him. I hope she goes to see Brax, but I hope it doesn't end in a fight... they really need to start talking things through. If she hasn't gotten over Brax in 18 months when he was in jail, she certainly isn't going to get over him while he is around. Ryan is not helping her either, she is thinking about Brax when she is with him... she can't help it, but she shouldn't hope that one day she will forget all about Brax and be madlessly in love with Ryan. Don't think that will happen, she needs to be honest to herself. Great chapter, I can't wit to read more Danni! I hope you update soon! Quote
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