Nothing Lasts Forever (by Danni02) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

I kinda of feel sorry for Ryan.

Hoping Brax leaves the River boys

More soon please xx

[Shezza]

Great Update I don't think Charlie is being fair asking him to give up the river boys they are like his family, what would she say if he asked her to give up Leah and Bianca. Even though I want Brax and Charlie together I couldn't help but like Ryan in this chapter his advice was fantastic. Can't wait to see what is next

[~Zoe~]

Good update Danni

[Dingo x]

Great chapter...

Really hope Charlie gives Brax a second chance! (:

Can't wait for more. xx

[Shezza]

Great Update! I think that Jacob is being a little bit of a spoilt brat screaming and getting his way over the teddy, especially since it was Xavier's from when he was a little boy. I agreed with Ruby.

I wonder whether Charlie will give Brax another chance or not???

Can't wait to see what happens next???

[Inactive User]

Yay another update! Liked it. More soon please xx.

[Red Ranger 1]

Aww, I love that Xavier has a teddy bear.Hope Jacob doesn't damage it and gives it back.Loved Charlie's little joke about separate rooms.Looking forward to more.

[pembie]

Xavier having a teddy bear made me smile Hope he gets it back

Hmm Not sure Brax would leave the River boys for Charlie

Look forward to more

[once_upon_a_mind]

I hope she gives in to her feelings. I wasn't so thrilled when he gave up the boys in the show because they are his family btu I guess love does make people do things they never would have thought they could.

Great stuff, more soon please!

[JosieTash]

COOOOOOL !!!! 2 GREAT updates since my modem at home died [i’m currently at a Net café in town], most especially ……..

 Charlie laughed once more as she put it away in her bag. “Well, I think he would have got on fine without it considering how many little building blocks he has, but thanks” Charlie smiled lightly. “What, were you just walking about with it, hoping to bump into me?”

 “You’re Brax. This is thee Brax?” Ryan said as he looked at Charlie. Charlie nodded lightly before she glanced at Brax wanting him to go away.

 “He has your heart” Ryan said “And there’s no point in trying to win you over, because, I’m never going too”

 “I know” Ryan said “But I do believe that people can change. And he’s crazy about you Charlie. I think he’d do anything to ensure he gets to be with you” Charlie smiled lightly at Ryan as she felt a lone tear roll down her cheek.

 “You still have a teddy bear?” Ruby laughed.

“I just never wanted to chuck him out” Xavier said “My Dad bought that on the day I was born, so I’ve had it all my life”

 “Mr Blue” Xavier said and once again Ruby laughed. ………..ironic that Ruby should laugh, given that she - at a similar age - called a toy feline CAT !!!!

 “Good luck getting that back now” Ruby said.

 “Oh my God....well then we will move......” Ruby said as she trailed off as she saw the look on Charlie’s face, like she was about to burst into laugher. “Mum, that’s not funny” Ruby said as she stepped forward and lightly hit the side of Charlie’s arm.

“It was a bit” Charlie laughed “Of course Xavier can stay in your room” Charlie sighed “I mean, I don’t exactly love the idea, but you’re engaged and you’re growing up. I just need to start accepting you’re not a little girl anymore. You know, you’re an adult, with a fiancé”

 “Me” Jacob said as he put his hand on the milk carton, and helped Charlie pour the milk into the cups.

“Aww you’re a very clever boy helping Mamma” Charlie smiled as she put the milk back into the fridge, before lifting her son to the ground.

 “I know you’ve had a lot of hurt in your life, but maybe, just maybe, this is your chance to finally be happy. Maybe he got out of jail to give you the happiness that you deserve” Ruby said and Charlie smiled lightly at her daughter, as she thought about what she said. Maybe Brax had come back to give Charlie the happy life that she wanted. What Charlie needed to decide now, was if she could trust him enough to give him that second chance.