callyha Posted December 3, 2011 Report Posted December 3, 2011 Fantastic updates Danni! I keep reading them at work then try comment when I get home....... hasn't really gone to plan there....sorry I did feel sorry for Ryan, he did seem like a decent enough bloke, but he was right, if Charlie still has feelings for Brax in that way, she is never going to be able to build another relationship when she sees Brax a lot in the bay. I LOVED Charlie winding Ruby up about Xavier staying in her room I love how you write their relationship (Charlie&Ruby's) Is soo sweet Jakey just continues to be so adorable he's so cute! Cookie! The conversation between Charlie and Xavier was really sweet, something I think Charlie benefited from.....especially if she is going to go and see Brax... WHICH, by the way, I thought was hilarious that he used Jakey's building block as a way to see Charlie! and him texting her asking if Jake is happy now he has it back April pointing out that Charlie and Ruby are related to Colleen and that Colleen would have to go to the wedding if it were close family and friends going did raise a huge smile on my face too. Update soon please Danni! Quote
Inactive User Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 (edited) Great chapter Liked the talk between Charlie and Brax Whoa whoa at the ending!! :o My heart skipped when I was reading it! Does it sounds like Ruby was raped....???? Did Casey do it?? Hope not! Oh my goodness! Poor Ruby! You can't leave it there! More soon please xxxx Edited December 4, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
soph1303 Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 Great update, YES!! Chax are back together !!! Great talk between them too !! OMG at the ending!!! It does sound like Ruby was raped !!!!! Hoping it wasn't Casey who did it!! More soon please Quote
ilovechax Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 YAY Chax are back together! Loved their talk ! Oh no poor Rubes, it does sound like Casey raped her. If so hope it doesn't cause problems between Charlie and Brax! Please update soooon Quote
pembie Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 So Charlie and Brax are back on hopefully Brax won't get caught up with helping Heath and Casey out of trouble Hmm the ending it does sound like Ruby was raped I don't think it was Casey through could it of been Heath? Quote
once_upon_a_mind Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 Sorry haven't been leaving reviews of late. I'm still reading and really enjoying this. So glad Chax got their stuff sorted out. OMG did Ruby get raped! I don't believe it was Casey though (but you may easily prove me wrong!) Update soon please! Eager to read more! Quote
Dingo x Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 Great chapter! Yay! Chax are back together! (: OMG! The ending is so sad, if she did get raped I really hope it wasn't Casey! I don't think Casey is the sort of person that would do that anyway, he wouldn't be able to live with himself and Brax would kill him. Can't wait for more. xx Quote
totally Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 Charlie and Brax are back together! YAY! Hope Charlie changed her mind about having more children. But Casey... if he did what I think he did... Charlie is going to freak out! I hope she doesn't resent Brax for it, it is not his fault. Casey should be punished for this, but it might not be what I think it is though! I can't wait to find out! Thank you for the 'reunion update'. I loved it! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 Had to smile at the beginning where Brax said he was going round Charlie's.He does deserve a second chance now he's done what she asked, although it might be an idea to take it a bit slow.And woah at the ending!I had the same thoughts as everyone else about what's happened to Ruby and who seems to have done it...Looking forward to more! Quote
Chester-Sam Posted December 4, 2011 Report Posted December 4, 2011 Oh my God! The ending was a shock! It looks like it was Casey, although I'd be shocked if it was. Although I suppose he's looking more and more like a River Boy so who know e soon Poor Ruby, and poor Charlie! She knows what it's like, nobody wants that for their child. Quite the cliff hanger.. Update soon! - Sam. Quote
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