Nothing Lasts Forever (by Danni02) - comments

[pembie]

Intriguing stuff. Oh dear Xavier arrested I kind of see why he was arrested but I dont blame him for hitting Casey.

Could Xavier be involved in the rape somehow? I hope not ooh you have me wondering again, naa I stick to my theory.

[soph1303]

Great update,

Still believe Ruby over Casey!!

Can't believe that Casey isn't getting arrested and Xavier is !!

More soon please

[Dingo x]

Great updates.

Looking forward to more. xx

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh, I can't believe they threw Xavier in a cell and let Casey go.I'm having a hard time seeing how they can convict Casey if Ruby's word isn't enough, unless he suddenly realises what he did and confesses.Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

[cb2180]

Another really good chapter, love Jacob! Looking forward to the next update

[Jen1205]

Great updates.How sweet is Brax trying to get Jacob on side. Poor Ruby, I was kinda hoping Casey hadn't done it but I think Ruby is telling the truth now. Looking forward to the next chapter.

[RoRo90]

Great update

loved the last two chapters

This whole Casey and ruby situation as got me hooked

I don't think she is lying but I really believe Casey doesn't realise what he did, cant wait to find out what actually happened that night

So glad that Brax and Charlie are back together

and Jacob is just too cute cant wait tot see brax win him over

update soon cant wait to read more

[JosieTash]

LOVE the darkness [the rape story] and the lightness [brax trying to win over Jacob], especially.............

 “So it’s my fault” Ruby said as a tear rolled down her cheek. “Because I kept showering. I washed away evidence”

 “I do” Ruby managed a week smile. “And, I know, I mean, look at you, you’ve gone like 20 years since your....and you got a child from it. I know I can get through this because I just need to look at you, you did it, and I know I’ll be able to as well” Ruby said and Charlie smiled lightly as she hugged her daughter.

 “But what are they going to get?” Ruby asked “There’s no evidence anymore” Ruby cried “Why is he lying? Hasn’t he hurt me enough already?”

 “I just don’t feel hungry” Ruby sighed “I feel horrible and dirty. I don’t want to eat”

 “Not great” Charlie sighed “She didn’t sleep well last night. She kept seeing it happened. She kept yelling out for Casey to stop. So I had to sit up with her most of the night. So I’m pretty tired myself, but thankfully Ruby is sleeping, has been with no nightmares for the last hour, so that’s good”

 “Away” Jacob said as he held his hands up to go to Charlie. Charlie smiled lightly at her son as she lifted him into her arms.

 “Cookie” Jacob smiled as he clapped his hands together excitedly. Brax laughed lightly as he opened the box and pulled out a cookie, handing one to Jacob. Jacob looked down to the cookie as he shook his head. “No” Jacob pulled a face a before he dropped the cookie to the ground. Brax looked at Charlie confused.

“I ehm....I probably should have told you he likes white choc chip cookies not milk choc chip ones” Charlie said as she bit her lip.

“Wow and here’s me thinking a cookie was a cookie” Brax said “He’s a kid, can’t you just tell him that’s the kind he likes?”

“He’s not stupid” Charlie said “He knows the different between white and milk chocolate”

“Okay, so cookies didn’t work” Brax sighed “Thanks for the not so useful tip there Mother”

 “I really don’t know why he is so scared of you” Charlie sighed “He’s never acted like this with anyone else before”

 “No no” Jacob squealed as he held his hand out, as if asking Brax to stop walking. “Mamma” Jacob said as he held his hand out to go to Charlie, but Charlie shook he head as she stepped forward, and closer to Brax.

“You know, I think he feels threated by you” Charlie said “Here’s someone new coming in to get Mamma’s attention” Brax smiled lightly as he took a step forward.

[Guest]

Great update Danni please update again soon

[~Zoe~]

Great update Danni