Inactive User Posted December 12, 2011 Report Posted December 12, 2011 Great update, Danni More soon please xx Quote
Sazzle Posted December 12, 2011 Report Posted December 12, 2011 Great couple of updates! Thank you for updating so frequently and for the way you write! Its honestly fab and each chapter leaves me wanting more! Think Brax will have to be quite persistent but I'm enjoying his efforts and glad he and Charlie are having some time together Love story - Really interested to see where things are heading with Ruby and Casey... Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 Really hope Ruby gets some form of justice and Xavier gets let out.Brax brought the wrong kind of cookie... Quote
pembie Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 I found the cookie saga rather funny Shame on you Brax for getting the wrong one Hope we find out the truth with Ruby and Casey soon Look forward to more. Quote
soph1303 Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 Great update, Feel so sorry for Ruby !! Hope she can get justice for what happened to her!! Hope Brax wins Jacob round soon !!! More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 (edited) Great chapter. Poor Ruby! Hope Brax better win Jacob round soon Hope Charlie won't do anything stupid. (It reminded me when she kidnapped Grant in a attempt to get him to confess he raped her on the show) Wondering if she's going to do it again with Casey...hope not! Sorry if I said that coz it's just a theory of mine, that's all.. Looking forwards to the next chapter...xx Edited December 13, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
CharlieAndBraxLover Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 So much charlie, brax and jacob! I loved it! Jacob is slowly warming to him and its adorable. More soon please xxx Quote
JosieTash Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 LOVED that !!!!!, especially............. “Great, so what....20 more of those and he’ll like me?” Brax laughed. “Mmm” Charlie said as she pulled back “Let’s keep it PG” Charlie said as she looked over to her son, who seemed engrossed in a kids TV programme that was playing on the TV. “Well, I was thinking a counsellor” Charlie said “I know you might not think it’ll help, but the couple of times I went to see one after my....” Charlie trailed off “It did help and I wish I continued to see one, and then with the whole commitment issue thing too, they really helped me there” “Are you two?” Ruby said and Charlie nodded once again. “Mum, that’s great” Ruby smiled as she hugged her. “Friendly dragons?” Brax questioned “Well what’s the point in that?” “Well they couldn’t exactly be evil fire breathing bad ones, could they? It’s supposed to make the kids happy, not scare them” Charlie said. “Well the opening song is enough to put me off for life. Talk about annoying” “Hey, you’ve only had to watch it once. Consider yourself lucky” Charlie said “But Jacob seems to enjoy it, so that’s all that matters” Charlie smiled as they looked down to Jacob who was grinning at the TV, as April and Ruby came out of the bedroom. “Apil” Jacob smiled as he jumped down from Charlie’s knee and ran over to her and showed her his new toy truck. Although Jacob looked more like Charlie than Angelo, he did take the same hair colour as his father, but that was pretty much the only thing Jacob took from Angelo, the rest of him being all Charlie. “I tried to chuck him out the house. But Mum and Heath are on his side, so I left instead” “You left the house?” Charlie questioned and Brax nodded “I don’t wanna stay in the same house as rapist...” As Brax saw Charlie’s reaction to the word, he reached his hand out and rubbed her arm in comfort. “Well it’s not your fault, really” Charlie said “And you believe he did this, so....I mean if you thought he was innocent things might have been different, but...” Charlie trailed off and once again Brax smiled lightly. “Do you want me to talk to him?” Brax asked “Maybe I can get a confession out of him? And I won’t use my fists” “You promise?” Brax questioned and Charlie nodded as she pursed her lips together. She wasn’t sure if she could keep that promise. Casey had hurt her daughter, and she was going to arrest him for this one way or another, she’d make sure of it, after all she’d made a promise to her daughter that she would do this, and she felt that that promise had to be kept. Quote
Guest Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 Great update please update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 13, 2011 Report Posted December 13, 2011 Nice that Ruby's happy for Brax and Charlie.Good that she's got April supporting her.Looking forward to more. Quote
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