Nothing Lasts Forever (by Danni02) - comments

[totally]

Great that Ruby is happy for Brax and Charlie. Jacob is finally warming up to Brax, that is so amazing. I would love to see some more 'bounding' between them. Is it too early for Brax to play football with Jacob? Probably yes, but still... I love their interaction. Thanks again for these lovely updates! You are fabulous!

[Chax47]

Argh!! Fabulous update Danni!

I'm made up that Ruby was ok with Charlie and Brax being back together. They were really sweet in this chapter, I love that he has moved out because of Casey. It shows that he really is on Casey's side. I'm guessing that maybe he will have a run in with Casey at some point....could be very interesting!!

Great update Danni, can't wait for the next one x

[callyha]

Either I'm slack at commenting or you are ploughing through posting chapters (I'm gonna go with the latter )

I've missed loads! But I do read them whilst on lunch at work seeing as though I don't take a book to work lol.

I can't believe Xavier got arrested! You can't imagine how I was when I saw that.

I really love how you are writing this storyline with the rape, its so well written.

Ruby is happy about Charlie and Brax been together is

I have lots to say about these updates, but I'd end up writing bucket loads....and you know how much I love this story anyway

Fantastic as usual Danni...fantastic!

[JosieTash]

That was TENSE at times, but ALWAYS awesome !!!!!!!, especially.............

 “Well I’m sure your Mum would go with you for support, or I could come, if you wanted. Anything to make it easier for you” April smiled lightly as they continued to walk along the beach.

 The ENTIRE sequence that started with ………………Ruby said, before she stopped frozen to the spot as she saw the surfer emerge from the water. Her smoothie fell to ground as she tried to turn and run as far away from him as he could, but she remained still, not able to move, no matter how much she tried.

 “You mean Dr Scott” Ruby grinned “She’s going to be an ace doctor one day” Ruby said causing April to blush slightly.

 “I know” Ruby nodded “But Sid you do have to sympathise with me. I live with Charlie”

“Oi” Charlie said “Just because you’re in hospital doesn’t mean you can get away with something like that” Charlie joked and Ruby laughed. “But it’s nice to see

you laugh” Charlie smiled.

 “Yes” Sid answered “But let’s hope it doesn’t come to that. No one should have to have their -” Sid stopped mid-sentence as he glanced at Charlie. “Well, you’re free to go” Sid said as he looked back down at Ruby, before he excused himself from the room.

 She watched in amusement as she saw Brax trying his hardest to settle a shaken up Jacob, who had woken from his nap, while Charlie had been at the hospital, and didn’t appreciate being left with a strange man. “You said he wouldn’t wake up” Brax said as he handed Jacob to Charlie.

 Charlie laughed lightly as Jacob shook his head as Brax spoke to him. “Someone doesn’t want to share Mamma” Charlie said as the door opened and Xavier walked into the house. “Xav” Charlie smiled.

 “Nah” Brax shook his head “I don’t want to be associated with a rapist and people who can stick up for one. I want nothing more to do with them” Brax said again. “You’re my family now”

“I understand why you want to turn your back on Casey, but, Heath and your Mum. Your own Mother” Charlie said. “I don’t get how you can do that”

“Well I get it” Ruby said “And I admire your strength” Brax smiled lightly at Ruby before looking back to Charlie.

“You’re my whole life” Brax said.

 “Okay, so I can understand that, but you’re Mother?” Charlie questioned.

“Heath is her favourite and Casey is the youngest, so they can do no wrong” Brax explained “She doesn’t want to know me anymore because I don’t believe my own blood. Truthfully Charlie, I didn’t just leave last night. We had a big argument and Mum said I wasn’t welcome in her house anymore, she said I wasn’t really a Braxton anymore. That I.....I was dead to her” Brax said as he bowed his head down.

[Kaza]

So I haven't commented much. But I do love reading this!! I'm glad that Charlie and Brax decided to sort things out. I like the dynamic between Brax and Jacob as well, Its kinda funny I feel sorry for Ruby, hope things get better for her soon and that she doesn't end up pregnant. Update soon please

[Sabrina]

Chapter 87 - I'm not sure whether I believe Ruby or Casey.

Chapter 88 - I hope Charlie's going to see Brax.

Chapter 89 - Charlie and Brax are back together.

Chapter 90 - Poor Ruby. I liked the Charlie and Brax scene.

Chapter 91 - I can't believe Xavier's been arrested and Casey has been let go.

Chapter 92 - I loved Brax trying to win Jacob over.

Chapter 93 - I'm glad Jacob is starting to warm to Brax.

Chapter 94 - I feel so sorry for Ruby.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[~Zoe~]

I love reading this, it's great. Keep up the good work.

[Dingo x]

Great chapters!

Can't wait to see how this Ruby and Casey storyline is going to turn out!

Looking forward to more. xx

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Poor Ruby! April is such a good friend and beginning there for her

More soon please xx

[Red Ranger 1]

Ruby's reaction to seeing Casey again was well done, hopefully it might make him realise what he's done.Sid nearly putting his foot in it with Charlie was a nice touch.Glad Xavier's out even if he is still facing charges.Looking foeward to more.