Nothing Lasts Forever (by Danni02) - comments

[soph1303]

Great chapter,

Can't believe Charlie has to leave the force!!! But I'm glad that she is following her heart and sticking with her family and the man that she loves over her career !!

Glad Casey confessed properly and is dropping the charges against Charlie and Xavier!!

More soon please

[Samantha1]

Absolutely loving this story! Jacob is sooo cute, can't wait for more!

[~Zoe~]

Great update Danni

[totally]

That was so cute! Charlie and Brax are fully back together now. YAY! I love how Jacob is warming up to Brax, I hope that bond continues to grow in the next chapters. I can't believe it is nearly the end of your story, I am enjoying it so much. I am looking forward to your updates every day and I would like to thank you for your entire story. I am loving it. Can't wait for the next updates Danni.

[marie_the_bee]

Aww Happy Chax Yay

Glad Jacob is warming to Brax and Ruby seems to be happier!!

Update soon please x

[Chax47]

Sorry I missed a couple of chapters, but I'm all caught up now and omg!! Brilliant couple of updates

I can't believe Charlie lost her job, felt a little sorry for her but there's no way she could have gave Brax up! Glad Casey has been caught, hope he gets what's coming to him!

Chad were adorable in this chapter, their banter is amazing <3

Update soon!! X

[Inactive User]

Great chapter Loved it! Can't believe this fanfiction is nearly over!

Loved the banter between Brax and Charlie

I wonder how Heath and Cheryl are gonna react Casey and about what he had done now....

More soon please xx

Edited December 15, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~

[~Zoe~]

Great chapter Danni, shame its near the end.

[Samantha1]

Great chapter, loved all of it! Looking forward to more!

[JosieTash]

ADORED that, especially.............

 “Yeah, well we’ll see how these next 6 months go and then I’ll decide if I want to continue with the lease” John said and Brax nodded in agreement.

“I’d say that’s fair” Brax smiled as he held his hand for John to shake. “Guess I’ll see ya tomorrow” Brax smiled before he turned to walk out of the Surf Club, and made his way to Charlie’s house.

“Bax” Jacob smiled as he ran up to greet the man. Although their relationship was far from great yet, Jacob was warming to the man.

 “No offence Brax, but I think I can do a bit more than just showing people to their tables”

“Of course” Brax answered “What about if I were to make you co-manager?” Brax asked “Me and you, we’d make a great team”

“I’m not sure” Charlie shook her head “We’ve only just gotten back together and I’m not sure working with your partner is a very good idea. Yeah it could be fun, but I think we need space too, and work would be one way of getting that”

 “You know, it will be a shame I’m not going to see you in that uniform anymore, don’t think you could keep it, from me, do ya?” Brax joked and Charlie managed a small laugh before she started to cry.

“Hey, hey, baby, I’m sorry” Brax said “It was just a joke, I...”

“I know” Charlie cried as she held onto Brax “It’s just when I take it off, that’s it finished. That part of my life, and I don’t know what’s coming next”

 “Things like that” Charlie said as she shook her head “Often the people that you don’t expect.....they surprise you. I wouldn’t have thought he was capable either, but, Ruby wouldn’t lie about this, so I knew” Charlie said. Brax exhaled lightly as he kissed her forehead once again.

 “Well whatever happens, I chose you over my career, so you better make it worth my while” Charlie said.

 “Even Brax?” Ruby questioned and Charlie opened her mouth to talk but no words came out. “Nah, I could never stand in the way of you two” Ruby smiled lightly. “But you, Brax, do one little thing to hurt my mother, I’ll be after you”

 he smiled lovingly at Charlie before kissing her softly.

“Okay, I’m happy for you and all but please don’t do that in front of me again” Ruby said

 “I vote bikini model” Brax grinned as he looked at Charlie.

 “What about a child-minder?” Ruby questioned “You’d obviously need to go back to school for some certificates, but you’re great with kids”

 “I’m good with Jacob” Charlie said “He’s my child, I love him. But other people kids, no thanks” Charlie said as she shook her head

 “Well will you at least model that bikini for me” Brax smiled suggestively as he raised his eyebrows. Charlie laughed lightly.

“Well that depends whether or not you’ve been good”

“Oh, I’ve been very good” Brax grinned

It’ll be sad when this story ends !!!! Words just describe AWESOME it is !!!!!!!