Nothing Lasts Forever (by Danni02) - comments

[Dingo x]

Great chapter (:

love that Brax and Jacob are getting along now.

Can't wait for more. xx

[Red Ranger 1]

Nice that Xavier's got an idea what he wants to do.Charlie getting Jacob to bite himself was an interesting way of handling it.Looking forward to more.

[CharlieAndBraxLover]

Xav and ruby have good plans! haha awwwwwwwwww! Brax charlie and ruby are seriously the cutest ever. I laughed so much when brax wanted a hi 5 but jacob leant in to bite hahahahaahah! Glad charlie and brax still have flirty and playful scenes please update again soon xx

[Inactive User]

Great chapter Update soon please xx

[JosieTash]

That was ADORABLE !!!!!, especially.............

 “Eh, well I was thinking about what you said, you know, about me being a chef, and I love the idea” Xavier smiled. “I’m looking at the Gordon Blue Culinary School in Sydney”

 “Ah c’mon, I’m not exactly the best cook in the world and even I knew that” Charlie laughed as she picked up the glass and turned on the tap, filling the glass up with water.

 “Move to the city?” Charlie questioned, sounding slightly alarmed at the prospect of her daughter moving away.

 “Nah” Xavier shook his head “Mother-In-Law eats for free”

“I’m going to hold you to that Xavier” Charlie laughed as Brax came walking through to the kitchen.

 “Oh no where’s my feet going?” Charlie asked and Jacob giggled as he continued to move the sand, with Brax’s help, until he was confident his mum’s feet were hidden.

“Gone” Jacob announced as he pointed to the big pile of sand that had replaced Charlie’s feet.

 “Jacob, don’t you dare” Charlie raised her voice as she leaned forward grabbing Jacob’s arm and placing it up near his mouth as Jacob bit down on himself, before he burst into tears. “See it’s hurts doesn’t it” Charlie said before she immediately felt guilty and lifted her son into her arms to comfort him. “See baby that’s why we don’t bite” Charlie said as he rocked her son in her arms.

“No” Jacob shook his head as he looked down to his arm, where he saw his teeth marks. He put his hand on it before he started crying again.

 “Brax bit him” Charlie laughed and Brax gasped in shocked.

“Charlotte Michelle” Brax said “You take that lie back” Charlie giggled just as Georgie walked into the Diner.

 “Sargent G. Watson’. “So I see you took the promotion. Congratulations” Charlie smiled weakly at her.

 “Oh, well in that case” Charlie laughed “What do you think Jacob? Should we let him have a piece?” Jacob looked up to Charlie then to Brax, then down to the cake. He picked a little bit off with his hand before reaching out and passing it to Brax.

[Samantha1]

Great chapter, the Charlie/Brax/Jacob scenes were cute!

[callyha]

I keep missing updates!

Oh my chuffing god!

Anyway.....

all fantastic as usual.

Shame Charlie lost her job, she was a good copper. But now she can get a job where she could spend more time with Jacob (Who by the way is just getting cuter)

Ruby and Xavier moving to the city after Uni.....Charlie will be crushed (Obviously)

Loved Xavier's and Charlie's banter about the cooking course in Sydney

So glad Brax and Jacob are getting along so cute

Charlie making Jacob bite himself... a good move, just the crying breaking her heart

Loved the whole Charlotte Michelle bit

and how they were winding Colleen up with the biting.

can't believe its coming to an end.....but all good things have to.

Wait a minute....did I hear you say something about a sequel????????

hehe update soon

[RoRo90]

Just caught up on the last few chapters

Brilliant...

Glad that Casey finally confessed, feel kinda bad for Brax his whole family have turned on him

and Charlie losing her job wow a bit harsh

hope ruby can start getting her life back on track

and jakey is just to adorable but he seems to be warming o to brax a little

really great fanfic

cant wait tot read more

[Red Ranger 1]

Hmm...kind of in two minds about Jacob calling Brax Daddy but it's nice that he's settled, I suppose. Him wanting to dress up as a pirate was well amusing.Good that Ruby graduated and...bit of a shame that Casey and Heath are "away" for such a long time but I guess that's what happens.This was a really good and well-written fiction with lots of interesting ideas and I'm looking forward to the sequel.

[Shezza]

Wow What a last chapter I can definitely say I have absolutely loved this story I didn't want it to end. You are one very talented writer.

I really,really would love to see a sequel and most definitely would read it.

I hope to see more stories from you soon