Summer2011 Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 Really enjoyed reading this well done Quote
Inactive User Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 Had enjoyed the last chapter Well done! Thanks so much for sharing this fanfiction with us, Danni. And looking forwards to the sequel. Quote
Guest Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 Great updates I'd be interested in a sequel Quote
JosieTash Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 LOVED that sooooooooooooooo much !!!!! A perfect end for a BEYOND FANTASTIC fic, especially............. “Daddy” Jacob shouted as he ran into his parent’s bedroom in nothing but his underpants. “Daddy” Jacob shouted again as he lifted his hands to go up to him. Brax smiled lightly as he picked the boy up into his arms. Charlie walked back into the room, in a gorgeous sleeveless blue dress, that cut just above her knee. “What” Charlie asked as she looked up at Brax who was about to do up his tie. “You still can’t do a bloody tie” Charlie sighed “I’s no like it” Jacob shook his head as he pulled a face. “Well sweetie it’s Ruby’s graduation so you have to dress up nice and smart” Charlie said as she looked around his bedroom, trying to find where he’d put his suit. “Ruby” Jacob smiled. “Jakey wear this” Jacob smiled as he held up his pirate dress-up outfit. “Finally you’re here” Ruby said as she walked over to the car, and noticed her brother dressed as a pirate. “Wow you’re a pirate Jakey” “Arrgghh” Jacob growled as he waved his plastic sword in front of him. “I just graduated” Ruby said “No biggy” “Well giving what happened in your last year, I think you did good to stay on track” Charlie said and Ruby smiled lightly as she looked down. Casey had been sentenced to 15 years for her rape, and had to do 10 years before chance of parole. After hearing of his brothers sentencing, Heath went off the rails, and ended up back in jail, on charges of robbery, assault and for harvesting and selling marijuana, and had a nine year jail sentence to do. Cheryl stayed the same, relying on the pokies and alcohol to get by, and ignoring the only son who was trying to do good in the world. “A gift voucher for the spa, where you work” Ruby said. Charlie had recently taken a job as a receptionist at the spa that had opened up at the new resort. “Hmm” Ruby said as she shook her head, not believing her mother, but quickly shaking it off and went out to enjoy their lunch. “The new lady from across the street?” Brax questioned and Charlie nodded. “So, I was just being friendly, I....Charlie I wouldn’t need to go looking at another woman when I’ve got you” “I know” Charlie answered “I don’t think it was her you were interested in. I think it was what was in her arms” Charlie said as she bowed her head down. “I’m going to ask you a question, and you’re going to answer truthfully. Yes or No” Charlie said and Brax nodded lightly. “Do you want a baby?” Brax exhaled lightly before he nodded his head ever so slightly “Yes” Brax answered, seeing that he needed to be honest. Charlie pursed her lips together as she heard the answer that she had been expecting to hear. “Ruby and Jacob, they have different fathers. I have two kids to two different men and if I have a third with a third man, well there’s names for women like that” “Okay” Charlie nodded as she pulled back “Let’s do this. Let’s have a baby” “Yeah” Brax smiled as he pulled back from the hug and looked into Charlie’s expressive blue eyes. “Yes” Charlie smiled and Brax grinned excitedly as he pulled her into another hug. “And, you know” Brax said as he stayed in the embrace. “You’re right. Nothing does last forever” Brax said and Charlie pulled back and looked at him worriedly. “Nothing lasts forever” Brax smiled lightly as he cupped his hand around Charlie’s cheek. “Except you and me” WAAAAAAAY looking forward to the sequel of this AMAZING story !!!!!! Quote
pembie Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 A very good final chapter there. I have really enjoyed reading this fic, it was very well written throughout and had loads of awesome ideas and plot twists. Thank you for sharing your awesome writing talent with us. I will keep an eye out for the sequel. WELL DONE AGAIN Quote
soph1303 Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 Great last two chapters, Aww Chax baby !!!!! Looking forward to a sequel if you write one !! Quote
CharlieandBrax4Ever Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 (edited) Amazing ending to a fabulous story!! Naww they are going to have a baby, hoping for a girl! Edited December 17, 2011 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
Arielxo Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 Aww... Such a cute ending! So glad Ruby and Xavier are still together. Im abit sad about what happened to Casey and Heath being in jail and all. It has been an absolute pleasure reading this story. Thank you for sharing. & i am very much looking forward to the sequel Quote
totally Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 Oh that was so sweet! Jacob is calling Brax daddy! I am so glad about that, Jacob's biological father is dead and he does need a father figure, so I think it is great he sees Brax as his father. I am so happy they want another one, I am sure Brax will love his own baby and Jacob equally. Ruby graduated! YAY! Jacob was sweet in his pirate outfit. I can't wait to read your sequel Danni, of course I will read it! Bring it on! And thank you so very much (really can't describe how much) for this amazing story, I will re-read it again and again, I am sure of it! Thank you! Quote
Dingo x Posted December 17, 2011 Report Posted December 17, 2011 Amazing story Danni! Aww Jacob calling Brax daddy is so cute! The ending was so adorable. I'm definitely reading if you write a sequel! (: xx Quote
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