CharlieAndBraxLover Posted October 30, 2011 Report Posted October 30, 2011 Thanks for updating so fast. Great chapter. I wonder how Brax is? I hope angelo is really badly hurt, or dead so charlie can finally escape him cant wait for more.
Danni02 Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 Good update. Glad Ruby and Casey don't seem to be hurt so badly and that Charlie's seems to be okay too. Hopefully Brax is going to be okay, but I don't give a fu....sorry, I dont care about Angelo. Grr.# Update soon
Samantha28 Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 Good update! Glad Ruby and Casey aren't hurt as badly as I thought and that Charlie's seems to be okay too. Hopefully Brax is going to be okay, I dont care about Angelo, hope he leaves everyone alone after this. Looking forward to more!!
soph1303 Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 Great update, Glad that Ruby and Charlie are ok. I was getting a bit worried about Charlie there for a while. Hope that Ruby and Charlie manage to catch up again now that they're both safe. But where's Brax? He wasn't mentioned. Hopefully he's ok. More soon please
cb2180 Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 Glad Charlie and ruby are ok hope they get to Meet again soon!
callyha Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 Thank you everyone for the comments CharlieAndBraxLover, Sarah, Danni, Samantha28, soph1303 & cb2180 Chapter 25 Charlie had been allowed to got home after she had rested and had a few hours stay in the hospital for observations, Julie had told Charlie to have a 24 hours stay in the hospital -just to be on the safe side- but Charlie had refused. She remained glued to the seat she had found more than six hours before. She stared blankly at the wall in between two doors, she never looked to the one on the left, or to the one on the right. She fought the tears that wanted to fall from her face; not only were they tears of her own physical pain, but of her emotional pain; the doors infront of her kept her away from the man she loved, and the man she loathed. Both hooked up to machines, both in a critical condtion due to the severe beatings they had recieved. Bianca stood a distance away from her emotionally drained friend. She hated seeing Charlie like this; upset over the prospect of having to stay with Angelo and loosing Brax. Holding her arm in her hand to stop it from hurting, Bianca continued to walk slowly up to her friend, who had risen to her feet, but had her head in her hands and cried hard. Bianca turned her slow pace into a jog, and reached Charlie just as she collapsed to the floor, crying out hard. Bianca brought her friend close and rocked gently, soothing Charlie as she cried. Bianca wasn't too sure if it was one thing Charlie was crying over, or if it was eveything, but she knew Charlie had to cry and that she would stop when she had nothing left to cry out. ~*~ Ruby opened the door to her house and found Sally sitting on the couch, waiting for her younger daughter to come home. At this moment in time, Ruby didn't want to have to explain to her mum where she had been and what had happened, all she wanted to do was have a bath and get into bed; something the doctor told her she had to do. "Where have you been?" Sally asked, not looking at Ruby "Out" Ruby replied "Out? That's all you are going to say to me!" Sally rose to her feet "I have been sitting here, worried sick about you because you told me you were only going for a walk and you'd be back soon" Sally shouted "That was this time yesterday nearly Ruby!" "I'm sorry" Ruby said shamefully "I was walking on the beach, I saw Casey and he was worried about his brother, so I went to the club with him for support and things happened" "What kind of things?" Sally asked, her voice still raised "I couldn't watch what was happeneing in the Club any longer, so I left and I went to the Surf Club. And I got talking to a woman. Now that I think about it, it was just, so easy to talk to her" Ruby smiled "Like I had known her my whole life" Ruby tucked her hair behind her ears "Anyway, we'd been talking for a while and we headed back upstairs to see what was going on, and then-" "Then what? You went back to Casey's house and spent the night with him?" Sally asked as she crossed her arms "I think I've met my biological mother" Ruby said, ignoring her mothers comment about spending the night with Casey. Although, when she thought about it, maybe telling her she spent the night with a friend rather than the hospital would have been better "What?" Sally asked "Why do you think that?" Sally looked to Ruby and saw how her face lit up "She's called Charlie, she's barely fifteen years older than me, she was so easy to talk to, and we shared the same look" Ruby smiled "I know you don't beleive me-" "I do Ruby. I believe you" Sally smiled "But you seemed mad at me for not calling you" Ruby said as she looked confused "Been told by your thirteen year old daughter that you went to a club with a boy doesn't make a mother feel so good" Sally replied as she opened her arms out to her daughter "I'm just glad you're ok though" Sally smiled as she placed a kiss on Ruby's head "Yea, I'm okay. I just, I don't know how I feel about the fact that I've actually met her -met the woman who gave birth to me" Ruby said with a smile on her lips and tears in her eyes "Where is Charlotte now?" Sally asked as she looked at ther daughters face "At the hospital" Ruby replied, immediately regretting saying about the hospital "What? why is she there?" Sally asked "What exactly happened at the club tonight Ruby?" ~*~ Sitting in the canteen with a not-so-great cup of coffee infront of her, Bianca looked to Charlie as she brought a piece of cake to her mouth and nibbled a small piece off. Although Bianca had calmed Charlie down, she hadn't managed to get Charlie to utter one word since they went into the canteen. Bianca was worrying that there was more to Charlie's state of mind than just Brax and Angelo. "Charlie, I can't help you if you don't talk to me" Bianca placed her hand on top of Charlie's "I just want to help" "I know" Charlie whispered as she smiled to Bianca "I just, I can't get my head around things" "What things? Brax and Angelo you mean?" Bianca asked and Charlie nodded "Charlie, I can't help if you don't tell me more" "That's the thing: I don't think you can help" Charlie replied as she shook her head "Its my mess, my fault and I'm going to have to try and sort it out and hope for the best" "Charlie, you're not alone" Bianca said as she squeezed Charlie's hand assuringly "Even if Brax and Angelo aren't going to be here, I will. And so will everyone else; you don't have to sort this out by yourself" Charlie looked to Bianca and was grateful for having the sort of friend in Bianca that she did have. Bianca was one of those that you could tell anythign to and she wouldn't tell anyone -unless it was nessecary- and Charlie never thought she would have a friend like that "I have no idea what to do" Charlie finally said, her head bowed down as she looked to the table, trying to hide the tears in her eyes from Bianca "It's such a mess" "What is Charlie?" Bianca asked as she put her coffee on the table and turned so she was completely facing Charlie "I had a feeling I was, but I was too scared to check" Charlie began "Dr. Jones confirmed what I thought" "Okay Charlie, you are really worring me now, what is it?" Bianca asked as she looked Charlie in the eye, who looked back to her firend and saw the worry Bianca had for her.
totally Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 That was a really really good chapter. I feel so sorry for Charlie. I totally hope Brax will survive and I am secretly hoping Angelo won't. It would be better for everyone. I am glad Ruby feels the connection with Charlie. I am thinking Charlie is pregnant? But it could just as well be something else. If she is, it is Brax' baby, no? I really hope it is! I know I haven't commented before, but I have been reading this story for a while and it is so intense, I love it! I can't wait to read more, thank you so much for this.
Danni02 Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 Super update Cally! And I agree with totally's post. (Saves me writing as much eh lol) Think Charlie could be pregnant, hope Brax is okay, don't give a sh** about Angelo. Update soon
mft Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 just caught up with the latest updates. they are great. can't wait for the next one. I wonder if Charlie is pregnant.
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