Samantha28 Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 AMAZING chapter Cally!! I think she's pregnant too- if she is hope it's not Angelo's!!! Hope Charlie and Ruby meet again! Looking forward to more!!
cb2180 Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 Really enjoyed that! Looking forward to the update!
Inactive User Posted October 31, 2011 Report Posted October 31, 2011 Great chapter I agree with everyone's posts. Wondering about Charlie beginning pregnant Update soon xx
soph1303 Posted November 1, 2011 Report Posted November 1, 2011 Really good update, Poor Charlie !! Glad that Bianca is there for her! Yes Ruby - go find Charlie!!! Hope Brax is ok!! Also thinking that Charlie might be pregnant or really sick. If she's pregnant I hope its Brax's !! More soon please
Charlie&Brax_lover Posted November 1, 2011 Report Posted November 1, 2011 Oh my gosh! So sorry I didn't comment on the chapter before this, it was fantastic. But this one! This one was so good Really hope Brax will be ok and Angelo isnt. I wonder if Charlie is pregnant again? Please update soon!
callyha Posted November 1, 2011 Report Posted November 1, 2011 Thank you all so much for the comments! I love how you all think Charlie is pregnant...... totally, Danni, mft, Samantha28, cb2180, Sarah, soph1303 & Charlie&Brax_Lover thanks! PS/ I'm really feeling the love you all have for Angelo! Chapter 26 Charlie looked away from the intense stare Bianca had on her. A mixture of feeling comforted and on edge filled Charlie as she tried to think of the best way to tell Bianca. Bianca took one last look to Charlie before she placed her hand on top of Charlie's "Charlie please-" Bianca pleaded "I'm pregnant" Charlie blurted out "Charlie!" Bianca smiled widely "That's great!" Charlie shook her head "Isn't it?" "I don't know" Charlie wiped her face "I've gone so long without family, and now I have a baby growing inside me-which is great" Charlie began "But, I have no idea who the father is" A single tear that perched on the edge of her eye fell freely as Charlie looked to Bianca "Surely its Brax's" Bianca replied "You and Angelo haven't done any of that for ages" Bianca added Charlie shook her head as she looked to the table in shame "Angelo wanted it one night, I didn't, but I had to" Charlie looked to Bianca "I slept with Angelo and Brax in the same week, and I can't figure out which one is the dad" more tears followed the same path as the one before "Oh Charlie" Bianca felt sorry for Charlie "And now look how things are; Brax and Angelo are laid up in a hospital bed, both on breathing equipment, both in medically induced coma's and both could die" Charlie wiped the tears from her face "If Angelo survives and Brax is the father, Angelo will kill me. And if the baby is Angelo's, I'll never be away from that part of my life" Charlie sounded as though she'd given up, yet hopeful that Brax was the father "Isn't there any tests you can do?" Bianca asked "Dr. Jones said they could do a DNA test now before I get too big. But the only problem is, you need permission for the possible fathers to get some of their DNA" Charlie answered "God, you could just imagine what Angelo would say and do if he found out about me and Brax" "Charlie, don't be worrying about that now. Stressing can't be good for the baby" Bianca said as she tried to calm Charlie down once more "If I were you-" "You'd keep you're legs crossed" Charlie spoke down to herself, thinking of herself as a slut "No" Bianca said with a small laugh "I wouldn't say anything until I know the outcome of Brax and of Angelo" "But what if they both die? I'll never know which one of them is the baby's dad. And what if they both survive? Brax will want to know if its his and Angelo will be so sure its his and he'll be wanting a son to carry on his business" Charlie worked herself up "Charlie, you're thinking about tomorrow and the day after. Think about right now; you need to stay as calm as you possibly can, you have a baby to think about now and I'm sure every doctor will tell you that stressing and worrying about things that haven't happened yet isn't going to do any good for the baby" "I know you're right, but-" "No buts Charlie" Bianca cut in "I'm by your side through all of this okay? You're not alone" "Thanks" Charlie smiled as she looked to Bianca "There's just one more thing" "Its not twins is it?" Bianca asked "No" Charlie replied as she pushed the plate with the cake on away from her "You know I told you about my daughter I gave up for adoption?" "Yea" Bianca replied after swallowing her mouthful of coffee "I think she's in the bay" Charlie said "actually, no. She is in the bay; I'd recognise those eyes anywhere" Charlie smiled "She's in the bay?" Bianca repeated, nearly choking "Yea. I was sat talking with her for a while before the fight at the club" Charlie replied "She's so beautiful" Bianca smiled as she watched the happiness run through her friend; talking about the daughter she had given up took her mind of the here and now, the imposing concerns over Angelo and Brax. And, although there was only so long before Charlie's mind would wander back to Brax, Angelo and the baby, Bianca was determined to make sure Charlie smiled and thought about her daughter for as long as she could. ~*~ Sally parked the car in one of the few spaces available in the busy hospital car park. Ruby had been dropped off at the entrance as Sally didn't know how far she would have to go to park the car. Ruby waited as patiently as she could for her mother to walk to the door; she was excitedly anxious about seeing Charlie once more, that was if she was still in the hospital. "Sorry Ruby" Sally said as she held her hand out for Ruby to take hold of "Place is busier than I've ever seen it, that fight must have been worse than you said it was. I'm just glad you weren't hurt" "Yea, me too mum" Ruby smiled as she hugged her mother "I don't even know if Charlie will still be here" "We can always look. Wont hurt us" Sally smiled as she looked to her daughter "Are you sure you can remember what she looks like? I mean, it has been thirteen years since you last saw her" Ruby asked as she and Sally made their way into the hospital "She would have changed, but I don't think anything too drastic" Sally replied as she followed Ruby passed the receptionist and through a set of doors "erm, Ruby" "Yea?" Ruby asked as she stood on the spot and looked to her mother "Why are we going to the canteen?" Sally asked "I'm thirsty and for some reason, the bottled drinks are cheaper down here than they are up there" Ruby replied, pointing up the stairs "I could do with a cup of coffee myself" Sally smiled as she saw the cheeky grin on Ruby's face, she followed Ruby down the remainder of the stairs and along the corridor to the canteen. Ruby opened the doors and held then open for Sally to walk through; Sally watched as Ruby walked over to the fridge and grabbed herself an orange juice before she made her way to the hot drinks stand. "Don't forget the one sugar" Sally said as she walked closer to Ruby "I won't mum" Ruby replied as she put the sugar into the cup and mixed, Sally walked over to a table and proceeded to sit herself down. ~*~ Casey threw the clothes he was wearing into the washer and slammed the door shut in upseted anger. He then made his way into his room and got himself re-dressed before he went into Brax's room and grabbed a bag and threw a few tops and trousers into it. Casey then walked passed his mother's bedroom door and into the bathroom, where he went up to the cupboard and put Brax's toothbrush, comb, deoderant and toothpaste in the bag. Casey looked at himself in the mirror; the image he saw was of a boy, in way over his head with a bruise on his face. Casey wondered how he only suffered a little injury and Brax suffered great injuries; Casey also found himself wondering, why he was alone in all of this. Heath heard all the banging and crashing from outside. Panicking that adebt collector had entered the house with no one home, Heath grabbed a plank of wood before he approached the door. He pushed to door opene slowly, peering in through the gap in the door as he tried to see who was in his house. Seeing nothing but his own shadow on the wall opposite, Heath crept into the house and followed the noise coming from Brax's room. Again, he pushed the door open slowly and saw a figure sitting on the edge of the bed with their head in their hands. "Case?" Heath questioned as he approached his brother "Case what's wrong? Why you in Brax's room" Heath asked as Casey turned to look at his older brother "Brax is in the hospital" Casey replied monotoneously "What?" Heath asked as he took a step closer to Casey "Brax is laid up in hospital because of that stupid fight at Angelo's" Casey explained "Is that why you have a black eye?" Heath asked, pointing to the bruise on Casey's face "Yea. Me and Ruby both got hit; we're okay though" "Good" Heath put the plank of wood on the ground "But what about Brax?" Heath asked as he moved closer to Casey, who sighed as he looked away from Heath and tried to remember everything it was that the doctor had told him, nearly twleve hours ago. ~*~ Charlie finished the last bit of cake on the plate infront of her. She licked her finger to rid herself of the crumbs that remained on her as she glanced to Bianca's empty cup of coffe "I'll get you another one" Charlie said as she rose to her feet "No" Bianca shook her head "You don't have to" "I want to. You've sat with me down here for, god knows how long and listened to everything I've had to moan about; a coffe is the least I can get you" Charlie smiled gratefully to her friend as she stood behind the chair. Bianca sat back in her chair and watched as Charlie placed a cup under the machine and press the button for the coffee. She noticed a woman also walk over to the coffee counter and stand just behind Charlie; she also noticed the looks on their faces: as though they had seen a ghost. "Charlotte!?" "Sally!?"
Danni02 Posted November 1, 2011 Report Posted November 1, 2011 Charlie is pregnant, wow, I so hope Brax is the father! Loved the chat with her and Bianca. Oooo at the ending.....Sally and Charlie! Update soon
totally Posted November 1, 2011 Report Posted November 1, 2011 Brax has to be the father and he has to wake up (and be alright). I so hope that happens. I can't wait to read more! I loved it! Oh, I wouldn't mind Angelo dying...
Inactive User Posted November 2, 2011 Report Posted November 2, 2011 Great chapter Charlie pregnant?? Wow! I do hope Brax's the father Can't wait to see how Sally and Charlie react to seeing one each other again after these years. Update soon xx
Samantha28 Posted November 2, 2011 Report Posted November 2, 2011 Well I hope that it's Braxs. Angelo doesn't deserve a kid, the way he's been acting. oooo they meet again! Looking forward to more
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