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Sorry Red had a lot going on.

I loved the chapter.

Obviously did not get any of the star wars references but I did enjoy reading it :)

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LOVE this !!!!!!!!!!! VERY funny !!!!! ......... all the references to SW and the H&A ppl interplay !!!!!

LOVED how Xave fell for robotRuby and that he likes AprilD2 !!!! The hopelessly inaccurate Rivertroppers are cooool .....esp. cos it meant that Aunt Rachel didn’t die ...... Obi-Miles “I’ve got a beard now” is cool .........and the warnings [both blondes] against Xave getting interested in Princess Indi!!!!!

Yeah, sooooooooooooooooo much to love !!!!!!

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Okay, if anyone's been wondering what happened to this one, Miranda's got commitments elsewhere so she's had to pull out of writing it.At her suggestion, I've contacted Pembie and JosieTash and the three of us are going to be writing it together.So hopefully we'll have an update for you soon.

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Thank you Red. Glad you at least understood my reason for bumping this topic up the other day. As usual, my altruism was misunderstood and I was reprimanded, but hey ho. People with good intentions are always misunderstood, it seems.

Good luck with the story, it will be fantastic.

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VERY funny !!!! a GREAT mix of H&A and SW !!!!! ....especially .....

 “I would have you know young Skywalker I have taken a fair few people on sight seeing trips round the galaxy; we have seen things beyond your dreams in this baby.” Romeo Solo said patting and stroking the Blaxlandium Falcon.

 “I can show you the great talent of always having something to eat or drink. I’m always eating and drinking when people come to see me, nice little trick I mastered while using the power of the force” Obi-Miles said

 “His not talking his singing us a song to ease the tension between us” sighed Romeo Solo. Xavier stepped forward a big beaming grin on his face as he presented Romeo Solo with a little blue book.

 “Oh no, no problem young Skywalker just be warily of her blondeness”

My turn next !!!!!

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Yes!Great chapter, well done, pembie.Loved the nice little gags, especially their unimpressed reaction to the Blaxlandium Falcon and Obi-Miles having the ability to always eat.

Looking forward to yours, JosieTash!

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Brilliant guys :D Xavier and Romeo already arguing and bantering. Miles was a good choice for that part I think. Can't wait to see what happenes when they meet Princess Indigo....!

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