Bay Wars (by Miranda, Red Ranger 1, pembie and JosieTash) - comments

[EmyKate68]

Just reading this for the first time. It's really clever - even with my limited star wars knowledge, I'm finding it hilarious! Loving Liambacca & his incessant singing and Darth Palmer and his evil laugh Look forward to more chapters!

[Miranda]

hahaha! Musicians are known to rip people's arms out of their sockets! Must watch out for that in the series.

Very good JosieTash, some nice parodies. Who's Harvey though?

[JosieTash]

I forgot he's not on UK screens yet !!!!

He's a rival charter boat captain currently in Oz eps !!!!

[pembie]

Very funny chapter

Musicians are known to rip people's arms out of their sockets

I liked the part with Havey trying to steal the sight sighting

BiancaD7

That chapter was so good.

[Inactive User]

Such a great chapter and sooo funny!! Update soon xx

[Red Ranger 1]

Excellent work, people.Love the update, JosieTash, favourite was the gag about the Alderaanian accent.My contribution will have to wait until I'm back in the good old UK, so some time after Saturday.

I believe Harvey turns up in the UK this week, haven't seen an episode since Monday's so not sure if it's happened yet.

Look forward to seeing you all soon!

[Miranda]

My contribution will have to wait until I'm back in the good old UK

You globetrotting man of mystery, you!

[JosieTash]

OMG !!!! THAT was sooooooooooooooo funny, especially .......

 “A parsec is a unit of distance, not time,” Obi-Miles told him.

“Yep. This ship is so fast it made the distance shorter.”

 “Well, according to you, I’m not supposed to be able to use the Force at all, am I?” Obi-Miles walked down the ship’s ramp, a satisfied look on his face.”

 An image of a man appeared on the screen. “This is Senator Sid Organa. The Death Star’s here! We’re all going to die! I’m not even supposed to be in this! Damn those Special Editions! Aargh!”

 “The Jedi?” Heath looked at Palmer. “I thought you and Emperor Alfatine wiped all the Jedi out when you came to power?”

“We did,” Palmer agreed. “But Obi-Miles escaped.”

“Oh. Right. But he’s the only one, right? There aren’t any more Jedi out there in secret hideaways plotting the downfall of the Empire?”

 “There is something curiously familiar about him, much as there was with the princess. As if they remind me of someone I once knew, as if there is some deep connection between us…” Palmer shook his head dismissively. “Oh, well, I’m sure it’s nothing important. Worry about it another day.”

 Romeo stared at him derisively. “You’ve got to be joking. No-one with any brains is going to fall for a trick like that.”

“We’re dealing with Rivertroopers.”

 “That’s ‘we’ including me,” Romeo interjected as he entered as well. There was a smashing noise from the corridor behind him but he pretended not to notice. “So if there’s any reward, I should get it.”

Indigo was still looking at Xavier. “Hey, you’re blonde, same as me. None of my family are blonde but you and I are. It’s like there’s some sort of connection between us.”

“Hey, I’m blonde too!” Romeo pointed out.

“Yeah, but that’s just a coincidence.”

 Indigo stared at him aghast. “That’s it? We’re trapped in the middle of the most powerful space station ever built and that’s your plan? And what is that crashing noise out there?”

“Um, that’s Liambacca,” Romeo admitted. Indigo walked past him to find the corridor trashed and Liambacca holding up the mangled remains of his handcuffs triumphantly. “He’s a musician. He’s used to trashing rooms.”

Indigo stared at the trio in horror. “You’re my rescuers? Dumber, Even Dumber and Really Dumb?” She snatched up one of the unconscious Rivertroopers’ weapons. “Right. Follow me.”

[Inactive User]

OMG!!! Soo funny!!! Great update! Update soon xx

[pembie]

Really Funny stuff

Liked Darth Palmer crossing his fingers praying Miles was the last Jedi and all the blonde jokes annd Liam trashing the room

Is it my turn next