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Carina - Thanks! Dex is nothing, if not completely inappropriate.

matticus01 - Glad you like the brother/sister relationship, because inadvertantly this fic turned into more Indi/Dex than Indi/Romeo. Oops!

Zett - Thankies <3.

Red Ranger 1 - The Indi/Romeo relationship is sort of strained at the moment, with neither really knowing where they stand.

ldscott - Thank you. Dex/Casey is an unavoidable combination in my head.

soph1303 - Thanks! :)

pembie - Glad someone is feeling for Indi at this stage. Dex tends to be a bit of a scene stealer, doesn't he?

Miranda - Ha! Gosh, I was so worried about doing a pregnant story (I've thought about it but haven't had the guts to see it through), so I'm stoked you think its okay. I did do some research, but I guess it's an individual thing, and you're right, I haven't been there so it's a bit of guess work. I'm relieved that it's somewhat believeable.

EDIT: Also, Dex just likes to be in charge and Casey is sort of whipped :P.

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EDIT: Also, Dex just likes to be in charge and Casey is sort of whipped :P.

Whipped? :wink: I think Casey is like that with Ruby too, she's definitely in charge of him, so maybe he just likes it like that :lol:

That's a whole different fic I could write. :wink:

Update coming shortly.

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Such a sad chapter and yet very powerful at the same time.

& Marilyn died. I didn't expect that but the emotions were spot on.

Well done. Looking forward to more.

& I really hope Indi leans on Romeo because she will need him a lot.

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Oh...wow.I was really not expecting you to kill Marilyn.I'm glad Indi called Romeo.And I loved the whole Indi/Dex chat at the end, from his enquiring about whether she wants Romeo attacked by vultures to his encouraging her to go for it.Looking forward to more!

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Marilyn what? She what? I didn't expect her to actually die in this fic :(

Liked the Indi/Dex relationship and what they said. I hope Romeo will stop being so- well- Romeo-ish, and step up for her. I don't know what Casey will do, nobody ever does :blink:

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That was such a sad chapter really powerful didn't expect Marilyn to die :(

one a more cheerful note can Romeo be attacked by vultures :lol: sorry he just seems like a bit of a drip to me :lol:

look forward to next chapter

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I loved Indi's emotions & thoughts about calling Romeo & the fact that she wants to talk to him, yet she doesn't want it to seem like she depends on him.

Wasn't expecting you to kill off Marilyn but it was written extremely well with perfect emotions all the same.

Dex & Indi's relationship, of course was fantastically written. Loved them supporting each other.

A beautifully written chapter & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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