Perfectly Imperfect, But I Wouldn't Change A Thing (by Jen) - comments

[Jen]

Zetti - Thank you very much for the nice comment. I think whether there is this sort of invisible tie between Indi and Romeo, whether they like it or not. It's just sort of taking the time to figure out how they fit together.

Red Ranger 1 - Like pregnancy, death is one of those things that I generally avoid writing. I just -- I never feel like I'm going to do it justice, or it will turn out totally superficial or something. But everything in this fic is basically a segue into more Indi/Dex scenes, because I can't get enough of that.

Miranda - Remember that rumour/spoiler that Marilyn was going to die? Yeah, I used that when writing this fic. Like I said, I start this last year, so it was canon at the time! Ha! So much for that now. Like I've said above, I don't normally write death in fics because I'm worried people will think it's shallow and unnecessary to the plot of the story. What do you mean that you don't know what Casey will do?

pembie - Ha! Yeah, Romeo sort of needs to have a vicious bird attack him sometimes. But thank you for the comment as well.

Carina - Wow. Thank you. I don't know what else to say.

soph1303 - Thanks for reading.

[matticus01]

such a sad chapter...

Marilyn dying was so sad... Poor Sid!

Indi calling Romeo was.... possibly the best thing she could have done...

The brother sister dynamic you have created with Indi and Dex is amazing.... and even in sad moments Dex cant help but talk about Animal mating rituals, even if its just to give his sister some sense!

The Romeo being attacked by vulturs bit was just a little funny!

Just amazing Jen...

Update soon!

[Miranda]

Miranda - Remember that rumour/spoiler that Marilyn was going to die? Yeah, I used that when writing this fic. Like I said, I start this last year, so it was canon at the time! Ha! So much for that now. Like I've said above, I don't normally write death in fics because I'm worried people will think it's shallow and unnecessary to the plot of the story. What do you mean that you don't know what Casey will do?

Yes, I remember her certainty she was going to die, it seemed inevitable last year, didn't it?

Re: Casey, I meant will he 'be there' for Dex or will he not want to deal with it and walk away? He is a mystery to me in the real series so I wonder what will happen in your fic

[ldscott]

Wow. That chapter was beautifully written with just the right emotions captured perfectly.

Can't believe that Marilyn is dead, I thought she was going to be Indi's rock throughout the birth etc.

Can't wait to read the next chapter

Lisa x

[Jen]

Miranda - Remember that rumour/spoiler that Marilyn was going to die? Yeah, I used that when writing this fic. Like I said, I start this last year, so it was canon at the time! Ha! So much for that now. Like I've said above, I don't normally write death in fics because I'm worried people will think it's shallow and unnecessary to the plot of the story. What do you mean that you don't know what Casey will do?

Yes, I remember her certainty she was going to die, it seemed inevitable last year, didn't it?

Re: Casey, I meant will he 'be there' for Dex or will he not want to deal with it and walk away? He is a mystery to me in the real series so I wonder what will happen in your fic

Yeah, it's a shame the writer's sort of piked out and gave her the reprieve. Oh well.

Ah, I see. You'll have to wait and see.

Wow. That chapter was beautifully written with just the right emotions captured perfectly.

Can't believe that Marilyn is dead, I thought she was going to be Indi's rock throughout the birth etc.

Can't wait to read the next chapter

Lisa x

Thank you so much .

[ldscott]

Miranda - Remember that rumour/spoiler that Marilyn was going to die? Yeah, I used that when writing this fic. Like I said, I start this last year, so it was canon at the time! Ha! So much for that now. Like I've said above, I don't normally write death in fics because I'm worried people will think it's shallow and unnecessary to the plot of the story. What do you mean that you don't know what Casey will do?

Yes, I remember her certainty she was going to die, it seemed inevitable last year, didn't it?

Re: Casey, I meant will he 'be there' for Dex or will he not want to deal with it and walk away? He is a mystery to me in the real series so I wonder what will happen in your fic

Yeah, it's a shame the writer's sort of piked out and gave her the reprieve. Oh well.

Ah, I see. You'll have to wait and see.

Wow. That chapter was beautifully written with just the right emotions captured perfectly.

Can't believe that Marilyn is dead, I thought she was going to be Indi's rock throughout the birth etc.

Can't wait to read the next chapter

Lisa x

Thank you so much .

Your welcome!

[Miranda]

Aw... Finally these two sort themselves out a bit.

I could have slapped Romeo being so pathetic sometimes, but that is my default setting It is hard to read his face, that's true.

Poor Indi having to go on the bus and run around in her condition. Couldn't she have phoned him?

I think Jen, that you are doing an awesome job of making these two popular again, cos if they do get married in the series, obviously a baby would be the next step.

Oh, almost forgot Casey/Dex. Come on Casey, have the courage of your convictions!

Edited July 8, 2011 by Miranda

[HighwayUnicorn]

That was a fantastic chapter, Jen.

Absolutely amazing.

Loved your portrayal of Romeo & Indi there, especially with Indi having the major wake up call about her future.

Very well written.

Love Carina xxx

[pembie]

Very Good Chapter there Jen

so at last Romeo and Indi are sorting things out

I argee with Miranda that I could slap Romeo sometimes too

Can't belive Indi forgave him in the show for sleeping with Ruby

This story is always written really good

[Miranda]

Can't belive Indi forgave him in the show for sleeping with Ruby

No, me neither. You are reading Red's story about the aftermath of the Romeo/Ruby affair, aren't you? Where the Heart Lies, or something like that