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welcome back Laura glad you had a good hoilday

Good Chapter

I can sense Javier causing Aden and Belle some trouble at their wedding I don't think Javier's a bad guy his just in love with someone he can't have I think Belle feels lust for him and thats it well I hope

look forward to more

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I have no idea why I didnt comment before. I have read it..

Anyways. Javier is a tad obsessed isnt he?

I hope he doesnt cause trouble!

Looking forward to more :)

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Belle worked in a strip club? :lol: That has to be one of the funniest moment in the chapter!

"That's great man," as he rolled his eyes at Aden and Roman. "Let us get up the stairs safely ok? No man, you don't need that!" he said, as Geoff picked up a lamp on his way up. "Just put it down."

Geoff laughed, and with Tony's support, he got up the stairs safely. Ric brought up the rear, replacing the lamp carefully on the hall table.

Haha. Drunk Geoff, so epic Laura! :lol:

I am looking forward to the next chapter though and the wedding and Javier.....so please update soon! :wink:

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This is exactly the reason why, if I get married, I am not having the hens the night before.

The wedding in a couple of hours ... I wouldn't be up :wink:

Another great chapter though.

I must admit, I almost forgot Belle wasn't allowed to drink alcohol.

Brilliantly written & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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I feel this chapter is the clam before the storm somehow :unsure:

Belle working in a strip club :wub: I like the sound of that :lol:

Geoff drunk was funny :lol:

Look Forward to the next chapter

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Great chapter Laura Drunk Geoff so funny :lol:

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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In relation to your question RR1

So...is Geoff Catholic in this fic?!

Well...yeah, something like that!

It wasn't supposed to mean anything. It just fitted into the humour of that chapter to write Geoff in that way; going to Confession.

Yeah, sorry, I was in a ridiculously picky mood at that moment.

Loved that chapter.Annie moping over not having a boyfriend was funny.Intrigued to see where this is going to go now...

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