Dingo x Posted August 11, 2011 Author Report Posted August 11, 2011 Great chapter. Ruby vs Kelly hehe. update soon. xx Quote
Inactive User Posted August 11, 2011 Report Posted August 11, 2011 Amazing chapter. Well done Update soon xx Had just posted Chapter 38 of my fanfiction (The Beginning) moments ago Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted August 11, 2011 Report Posted August 11, 2011 I really thought the girl was going to be April for a second there lol. This is good. Please continue. Quote
elikell Posted August 11, 2011 Report Posted August 11, 2011 Another wonderful chapter. I feel kinda sorry for Xavier seeing Ruby but being with Kelly...Awkward! lol. Glad that Charlie seems to have gotten her job back. Can't wait to see what she gets up to there. And having coffee with Brax... Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Update soon please Quote
Angel90 Posted August 11, 2011 Report Posted August 11, 2011 That was a great chapter... Oh no Charlie and Brax... Wonder what he will sya when he finds out she is a cop... Love the relationship between Charlie and Ruby Awww Ruby is hurting over Xavier... Update son plz... Quote
Lucii Posted August 11, 2011 Report Posted August 11, 2011 Aw Ruby and Xavier even if it was so long ago they still care about one another even if he is with someone new Chax can't wait to see Brax's reaction when he finds out she got her cop job back update soon x Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 12, 2011 Report Posted August 12, 2011 Wow ... that was a great chapter ... I look forward to seeing how it progresses ... Chax Really well done & very well written. Love Carina xxx Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted August 14, 2011 Report Posted August 14, 2011 Will try and post next chapter tomorrow! Sorry for the inconvenience xxx Quote
soph1303 Posted August 14, 2011 Report Posted August 14, 2011 Haha great chapter Liked the sort of stand off between Ruby and Kelly. Aww Xavier and Ruby still love each other Yay Charlie got her job back. Hehe and she had a date with Brax ... I mean a coffee *cough cough* More soon please Quote
soph1303 Posted August 15, 2011 Report Posted August 15, 2011 Great update, Lol at Ruby tripping over Aww I felt sorry for Charlie and Ruby when Brax made the sister comment. Glad that Ruby met Casey and that they seem to be getting along well. Go away Xavier - Ruby should be with Casey More son please Quote
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