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Loved Bianca wondering how her mum will react to it all.Billy morphing into a pretend boyfriend for Bianca is a great idea...and seems like there might be an all-girl love triangle in the offing...

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JosieTash,

Great chapter. Loving this fanfiction so far :D Loved the Charlie/Ruby stuff

I am really sorry to hear you had been really ill. :( We are all praying and hoping you get better soon and pull through it. Get better soon! xx

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Ah, nice chapter.Interesting idea of Adrian having dormant mermaid genes.Nice that most of the other "angels" were there for Joey.Looking forward to the continuation/conclusion!

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Oh!Gosh!I'd kind of forgotten this was the last chapter so those last two words took me by surprise. Nice title drop at the end there.Love Dexter being the doting dad, surprised that Leah was the one to drop the plates but it was a nice twist, glad that despite the delay with the courier Joey read the message before finding out about Charlie and Bianca.There's a sequel coming, right?Because that really didn't feel like the end...

Overall impression and favourite moments?You expect my memory to be that good?Hmm.Pretty much everything involving Dexter's secret tryst with Joey.Ruby and Fake Nicole.Billy being a giraffe. Overall I enjoyed the story but my brain's too tired for an in depth review.Nice mix of storylines which gave some good material to most of the main characters, which I know is a difficult job.

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