The Honeymoon's Over (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[pembie]

I like the fact that Ruby and Mattie are both having a baby.

Thought Xavier's reaction to Romeo was good but didn't like Romeo losing his temper with Xavier.

Look Forward to more

[lozlovesh&a]

Good chapter.... continue please.

[JosieTash]

COOOOOOOL update, especially ……

 “Or what?You’ll hit me again?”Romeo could feel himself losing his temper in the face of Xavier’s stubbornness.“Because don’t think I’m gonna give you another free punch.You’re dating my old girlfriend, you’re doing my old job, anything you want to tell me?”

 Indi’s expression gave a perhaps too studied air of not caring.“Good for them,”she said in a faux casual manner.

 “It’s okay, I’m still a volunteer with the groups, doing the important stuff but…Irene and Bianca said if I wasn’t at college, I had to get a job, hence this.It’s not too bad, Xavier isn’t at college either, so we get to meet up on the beach during my break and chat about being the town losers.”

 April coughed slightly.“I don’t think so.”Ruby caught the faintly embarrassed tone of the comment.April looked at her awkwardly.“It’s just, Dexter and I, we haven’t…I mean, we don’t…”

[Guest]

I missed Chapter 2 but just caught up on both chapters I like the fact that both Ruby and Mattie are pregant please continue

[HighwayUnicorn]

I am so sorry, Red! You advertised this fic and I had intended to read it but I haven't been online because I've been ill.

But I'm here now, although still unwell ... but at least now I can comment.

I am loving this fic so far. The first chapter was really interesting and definitely had me thinking loads of things.

Once again, throughout, I am loving the character interaction and portrayal.

Absolutely brilliantly written and I really look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[Inactive User]

Had been catching up with the last two chapters. Loved it. Looking forwards to read more of this fanfiction Update soon xx

[Merlin]

Thanks, RR1, I'm at home feeling miserable with the 'flu, now I've got one of your fics to cheer me up!

Looking forward to next chapter.

[HighwayUnicorn]

Another great chapter, Red.

Loved the interaction between Nicole and Matilda.

Brilliant as always, well done.

Love Carina xxx

[Inactive User]

Amazing chapter. Loved it so far Liked the interaction between Nicole and Matilda Update soon xx

[Zetti]

I apologise for missing two updates. I have so much going on, its hard to get time to sit down and read.

I did love both updates and I love the last line of Chapter 4.

Looking forward to more