The Honeymoon's Over (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

Another great chapter, Red. Really well written as always.

Well done.

I look forward to more.

Carina xxx

[Red Ranger 1]

Ah yes, a plug. Talking of plugging, did you ever read my fic 20/20 vision, about Ric, Matilda and Lucas in the future when they are about 30 years old?

I think I did, yes.Might have commented on it, I think that was in my early days on this forum when I was a bit more lax about that sort of thing.

Update tomorrow, everyone, promise you!

[lozlovesh&a]

Aw loved the ending with Ric & Mattie. Pity about Ruby's reaction but think Romeo could have asked her better then that. Not sure why April wants to break up with Dex though.

Please continue.

[Barbara]

I'm glad Mattie got the job! Hopefully, it'll all work out for her.

I was enjoying April and Dex' relationship. April should talk to him asap.

Aw Ric and Mattie are getting married! Too bad, it didn't end so well with Ruby and Romeo but his proposal was a bit sudden and he probably should have picked some other time to ask Ruby.

More please.

[Miranda]

Ahh, how sweet. Didn't realise Ric and Mattie had been together for 6 years

Not looking good for Ruby and Romeo... Or Dex and April. Or Xavier and Indi. Dear oh dear

[pembie]

It looks like Ric and Mattie are the only happy couple here

Romeo doesn't really live up to his name when romancing girls does he? He could of asked Ruby better than that.

April and Dex they need to have a talk

Look forward to more.

Edited September 11, 2011 by pembie

[Red Ranger 1]

Ahh, how sweet. Didn't realise Ric and Mattie had been together for 6 years

Well, they got together mid to late 2006(although they did break up for a few months a year or so later)and with the timescale of the two fics this is mid to late 2012.

Thanks for the comments, everyone.Don't know when the next chapter will be up, probably later in the week.

[HighwayUnicorn]

I loved this update, really well done.

The interaction between all of the characters was lovely to read.

Well written, well done.

Carina xxx

[Guest]

Great chapter can't wait for the next update

[JosieTash]

LOVE that Maddie’s got a job with Morag, especially since Indiana Evans is currently in a similar role in legal drama “Crownies”

It's BIG that that April kissed Xave, and his reaction

Dex’s one liners are always ace, e.g. “A slice of anchovy and some quality time with the hot waitress, please.”, …......

...... AND the opposing responses to the proposals ……

 “You just ask me to marry you, just like that, out of the blue?Have you even thought about what it means? Or is this just some brainless way of cheering me up?’Cos if you haven’t noticed…didn’t work.”She got up and stormed into the bedroom.

Romeo was left sitting there, nonplussed.“Thanks for the advice, Ric,”he said at last.

 “No, I’m asking you to marry me because we’ve been together six years, because you’re the best friend I’ve ever had and because I can’t really imagine living without you.It’s taken me six months to save up for this thing and I’d be proposing to you even if you weren’t pregnant.But…I guess that is another reason for us getting married, yes.”He paused, waiting for an answer.“I’m so glad I didn’t go down on one knee, I’d have got cramp by now.”

Matilda looked from Ric to the ring, from the ring to Ric.She thought about wearing that ring, about being his wife.“Yes,”she said quietly.

Ric looked at her cautiously.“Yes I’d have got cramp by now?”

She smiled at him.“Yes…I will marry you.”