Inactive User Posted September 12, 2011 Report Posted September 12, 2011 (edited) Great chapter Can't blame Ruby for reacting the way when Romeo asked her to marry him. Whoa April kissed Xavier! Not expecting that at all. Ric and Matilda getting married, awww Update soon xx Edited September 12, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
Perry Posted September 12, 2011 Report Posted September 12, 2011 I don't think Romeo's heart is in this relationship which is sad, aprils a whore and morag is a big softie. Also Ric's proposal was soooo cute. Quote
Zetti Posted September 13, 2011 Author Report Posted September 13, 2011 Er..Xapril? I am still a little bit shocked that you allowed them to kiss..lets hope you get them together.. Cute proposal! Looking forward to more. Quote
Perry Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Oh that was oh so brilliantly horrible, kind of wish you didn't give us that warning at the start I found myself worried fir George in that Romeo/nicole scene. I guess this is the first time that I have to tell you that I'm not looking forward to the next update, poor Xav he was already beating himself up enough, not his fault his ex is(was) a whore. . Quote
Guest Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Wow that was a great update but a bit upsetting at the end please update soon Quote
Inactive User Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Whoa such a gripping and well-written chapter! The ending was so sad You wrote it really well. Update soon xx Quote
JosieTash Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 WOAH !!!!! What an ending !!!!! Such a BRAVE choice to tackle such a taboo subject !!!! Other especially memorable moments …. “No,”he agreed,“But we’ve only got another month of pre-marital sex so I think we should get as much in as we can.” Matilda put her arms round his neck and smiled.“Mr.Dalby, I like your thinking.”She kissed him enthusiastically.“Do you reckon it’ll be any different now we’re engaged?” “Get upstairs and we’ll find out.” Sid was stood there, sipping an early morning cup of tea.The expression on his face was halfway between nostalgic recollections of sneaking out of girls’ rooms and idly wondering where he could get his hands on a shotgun. Romeo shrugged.“I dunno.I don’t know how we’ll live, where we’ll live, how we’ll look after Junior.I just…I just know I’ve never felt this way about anyone before, I’ve never been this certain that we could have a future together.” Nicole smiled.“Have you thought about telling Ruby all this, instead of your stand-in big sister?” “Do you think she’d say yes if I did?” Nicole patted him on the shoulder.“At the very least…she’ll say no in a nicer way.” Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Wow... at the ending. I liked Romeo & Nicole's chat. And I love how Ric & Mattie are all happy. Please continue. Quote
Miranda Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 God! Glad you warned about the ending, that is a very bold move. As I'm in a real down phase at the moment however, I won't be reading on, sorry dear Red. Its a great fic but not for me x Quote
pembie Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Right I'm too sure here is April dead? A very brave move I did find Romeo's and Nicole chat very funny through Jezz that guy just doesn't have a clue More soon please Quote
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