Red Ranger 1 Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Thank you so much for the comments, everyone, I was kind of worried how people would react.I think in 30 or so solo fics on here I've had about four on page deaths and every time I come to write one I haven't wanted to do it.But hey, be bold.Don't know when I'll have time to update, hopefully next week some time because I'm going on holiday after that. Quote
Zetti Posted September 16, 2011 Author Report Posted September 16, 2011 Wow. Sorry I didn't comment before but I have been in a similar position & that was hard to read. It was well written though. Well done. Quote
soph1303 Posted September 17, 2011 Report Posted September 17, 2011 Wow great update, Was not at all expecting the ending, but it was really well written. More soon please Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 17, 2011 Report Posted September 17, 2011 I haven't commented on this yet ... ? Seriously ... what? Amazing! The ending was shocking though! But it makes me want to read more. I look forward to the next update. Carina xxx Quote
Zetti Posted September 20, 2011 Author Report Posted September 20, 2011 Oh wow. So many different emotions and reactions from them all. It is a very tough subject to write about. I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to more. Quote
JosieTash Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 SOOOO emotionally gripping ...... especially ,....... “I know but we’re not doing anything.We write letters, we organise protests, nothing changes.I can’t do anything, I never feel satisfied about anything.I’m messing Dexter about, Bianca and Irene are disappointed that I’m just a waitress, Xav and my other friends have got their own lives…It wouldn’t make any difference if I wasn’t here.” “Depends.Sometimes it was Stefan from the year above.Sometimes it was Prince William.”She noticed his amused look.“Hey, I quite fancied being a princess, okay?You don’t have to worry, I’m well and truly over him by now.And he married someone else.” “I’ve barely spoken to her since we got back,”Ruby realised,“She was one of the few people that didn’t judge us when we got together and…I wasn’t there for her when she needed me.” “Is there a manual on what to do when your girlfriend kills herself?Because I seriously have no idea how I’m supposed to act.” Quote
pembie Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 A very hard hitting chapter. Liked how everyone had diffrent reactions to the news. I felt sorry for them all. But Xavier's reaction made the biggest impact for me. I really want to see where you take this next Have a good holiday where are you off too? Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 Wow. Poor Dex, Bianca, Irene and Xav. Continue please. Quote
Inactive User Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 Wow wow such a sad and great chapter! You described everyone's emotions about what happened really well. Update soon xx Quote
Guest Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 Oh a very hard chapter but a great update I can't wait for the next update when you get back from holiday Quote
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