HighwayUnicorn Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 Once again, Red, a pleasure to read ... beautifully portrayed emotions ... I look forward to more and seeing where this goes next too. Well done. Great as always. Carina xxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 Have a good holiday where are you off too? Sicily.It's the advantage of having rich parents.Well, comfortably well off, anyway. Thanks for all your comments! Quote
soph1303 Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 Wow intense chapter! More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 Great chapter Liked the conversation between Ric and Romeo Surprised Indi hugged Ruby at the ending Wonder if Dex is gonna find out his best friend and girlfriend had kissed behind his back... Update soon xx And hope you enjoy your hoilday, RR1. *hugs* Quote
JosieTash Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 VERY COOOOOOOL update !!!! especially ...... “I’m sorry,”Matilda apologised,“But…it just seems so clinical.She was even younger than me and…and we’re talking about dividing up her assets?Which are what, a three figure bank account and a few stuffed toys?” Indi was silent for a few seconds.“Well, I guess we always knew this thing between us was only casual. Best we draw a line under it now, before it gets too serious.” “Look, you’ve got a kid on the way, I’ve got a kid on the way, you need the money.Let me help you out.I think the garage can just about afford it.” To the shock of both Ruby and Nicole, Indi got up, walked over to Ruby and hugged her.“I’m sorry for being such a cow to you.” Hope your holiday is totally ACE !!!!! Quote
Zetti Posted September 24, 2011 Author Report Posted September 24, 2011 Xavier my heart goes to him. I can't believe you actually split these two up & killed April but was it wise for Xavier to let Indi go? I mean he is going to need support & someone to lean on especially when he tries to make sense of it all. I do wonder if Dex finds out! I hope you have a good time Xx Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 Another really good chapter, Red. Written well, well done. I also am wondering if Dex will find out ... hmmm ... Enjoy your holiday! Carina xxx Quote
Perry Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 Poor Xav, liked Nicole and indi's chat and then Ruby as well. And I guess if Lucas can't be there, Romeo would suffice. Have a good trip Red. Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted September 25, 2011 Report Posted September 25, 2011 Can't believe Xavier & Indi broke up..... or that Indi hugged Ruby. Please continue. Quote
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