soph1303 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 Great update, Wow, again amazingly selfless Charlie!! She really has done a lot for Teagan hasn't she e.g. delivering and naming her baby for her!! Oh my god - Teagan is such an idiot! I see something really bad happening, or that at least Brax finds out and goes mental! More soon please Quote
Sazzle Posted November 16, 2011 Report Posted November 16, 2011 I've loved this from chapter 1 with the emotion you portray between Brax and Charlie...Love it! They seem to have both stepped up and Tegan seems very uninterested.... Thanks so much...looking forward to your next update and the bonding time Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted November 17, 2011 Report Posted November 17, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Shezza Posted November 17, 2011 Report Posted November 17, 2011 Another great chapter. I hope Lily is going to be ok I can't wait for more. Quote
Guest Posted November 17, 2011 Report Posted November 17, 2011 Great update please update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted November 18, 2011 Report Posted November 18, 2011 Great chapter Hope nothing happens to Lily at the party! More soon please xx Quote
soph1303 Posted November 18, 2011 Report Posted November 18, 2011 Great update, Aww Charlie, Brax and Lily are like a little family , despite the fact that Tegan is actually the mother!! Can't help but think that something really bad is going to happen at the party and then Charlie and Brax decide to go for full custody. Or that Tegan will simply run away and leave Lily behind with them!! I got a bad feeling about this party!! More soon please Quote
Dingo x Posted November 18, 2011 Report Posted November 18, 2011 Great chapter (: Looking forward to more. xx Quote
marie_the_bee Posted November 18, 2011 Report Posted November 18, 2011 Teghan is such a ditz ... Hope Lily will be ok...Glad that Charlie is bonding with Lily I think she is going to be more of a mum to her than Teghan is going to be...Such a cute lil family Can't wait for more x Quote
Sazzle Posted November 19, 2011 Report Posted November 19, 2011 Loved update! Hope that Tegan wakes up to herself or at least doesn't let anything serious happen to baby! Love how Charlie has allowed herself to love this little girl and Chax are so cute and seem totally committed...you can really sense the love in your writing. Thanks! Really looking forward to next update Quote
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