Shezza Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 I feel sorry for Brax a little in the last few chapters. I loved the interaction between Charlie and Lily in this chapter. Oh No I hope they find Lily and Tegan before something happens to Lily Charlie will help find Lily I hope. Great Writing you always seem to make me feel the emotions of the characters. Please Update Soon Quote
Inactive User Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 Great chapter Looking forwards to next chapter xx Quote
Dingo x Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 Great chapter. Feel so sorry for Brax. Hope he talks to Charlie soon and explains what happened that day and hopefully she believes him. Aww Charlie and Lily were so cute. Tegan is so annoying! She won't be able to look after Lily with no support. Looking forward to more. xx Quote
Sazzle Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 Really lovely update! So sad with Brax and Charlie...they literally don't function well without eachother Loved Charlie wanting to be close to Lily... hope that they can track them down quickly and Charlie can be there for Brax.. You portray the tension really well. Looking forward to next update Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 10, 2011 Report Posted December 10, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
soph1303 Posted December 10, 2011 Report Posted December 10, 2011 Great update as always , Feel so sorry for both Charlie and Brax !! They just can't go on without each other !! The whole Charlie/Lily bit was adorable !! Can't believe that Teagan would just run off with Lily like that!! Hopefully Charlie is one of the cops working on the abduction!! More soon please Quote
Inactive User Posted December 14, 2011 Report Posted December 14, 2011 Great chapter. Poor Brax! Hope he better get his baby daughter back soon. More soon please xx Quote
Dingo x Posted December 14, 2011 Report Posted December 14, 2011 Great update! (: Hope they find Lily soon! Looking forward to more. xx Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 14, 2011 Report Posted December 14, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Shezza Posted December 14, 2011 Report Posted December 14, 2011 Fantastic Update Another cliffhanger I am not going to be able to stop thinking about this now. I hope you update really soon the suspense will drive me nuts. I hope Lily will be okay and Charlie will find them safe and sound and then return Lily to Brax. I also hope that if Charlie finds them Tegan will tell her the truth about the kiss. Quote
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