Siobhan B Posted August 25, 2011 Report Posted August 25, 2011 wow this chapter was awesome! I love this story Brilliantly written chapter as always update soon plz Quote
ldscott Posted August 25, 2011 Report Posted August 25, 2011 Fantastic chapter. Glad that she told Brax, hopefully he can save her from Grant! Can't wait to read more Lisa x Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 25, 2011 Report Posted August 25, 2011 I loved Ruby calling Charlie 'mum' and I love that Brax seems supportive too. The preview sounds good. I look forward to more. Well written once again, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted August 26, 2011 Report Posted August 26, 2011 That was a awesome chapter really well written I laughed at the bit where it said Brax was shocked to found Charlie's front door open of course it is Brax the doors are never locked in Summer Bay Glad Brax is there is support Charlie Quote
Danni02 Posted August 26, 2011 Report Posted August 26, 2011 Great couple of updates! Oh wow the Bledcoes are in town! Didn't expect that one! And they called Grant, oh dear, things could get messy! Loved the little Ruby and Charlie moments and the Charlie and Casey chat. Aww Charlie told Brax. Hopefully he will be there for her when Grant arrives! Update soon Quote
elikell Posted August 26, 2011 Report Posted August 26, 2011 A wonderful update. Glad that Charlie told Brax the truth about everything. I hope he can protect both Charlie and Ruby when Grant shows up. Hated that Grant's parents turned up in the Bay. Poor Charlie, that must've been horrible! Loved that Ruby was supportive of Charlie Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 29, 2011 Report Posted August 29, 2011 Uh-oh.Well, I'm glad Brax didn't do much to Angelo but I'm kinda worried they might do something stupid with Grant.Trust Colleen to tell him where Ruby and Charlie live.Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted August 29, 2011 Report Posted August 29, 2011 Amazing chapter! I'm sensing something bad coming soon..... I'm looking forward to the next update More soon please xxxxx Quote
Inactive User Posted August 29, 2011 Report Posted August 29, 2011 (edited) Great chapter *shakes head* Oh, Colleen, Colleen Trust her to give the Bucktons home address to a rapist! Whoa at the ending! Hope Ruby stands up to Grant and kicks him out of the house. Praying he won't dare to turn her against her mother like he did on the show! Update soon-we need moreeee pretty pleaseee xxx And thanks so much for the comment on my fanfiction xx Edited August 29, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 29, 2011 Report Posted August 29, 2011 Oh dear ... this is not good. I hope Charlie and Ruby will be okay ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx Quote
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