JosieTash Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 WOAH !!! That was TOTALLY intense !!!! Grant is sooooooooo EVIL !!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAY looking forward to next time !!!! Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 OHHHHH NOOOOOOOO!!!! GRANT IS SO HORRID!!!! I CAN'S BELIEVE HE SHOT CHARLIE!!! please let her be okay .... Another great, intense chapter! I can't wait for more Please update soon xxxxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 Uh-oh.Grant is definitely psycho and that end was a real shocker.Hope Charlie's all right! Quote
Angel90 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 Sorry havent been commenting.. Just caught up on the chapters and Brilliant... Cant wait to see what happens next... Plz plz dont let charlie die... Everyone seems to be shooting her lately lolz... Looking forward to the next chapter... Quote
Danni02 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 Oh my goodness, that was an amazing update! So full of drama! Grant I can't believe he raped Charlie again! And then he shot her! He is such an evil bas***d. He really is! Grrr hmm. I hope Charlie is going to be okay and that the police get Grant and lock him away for good! Update soon Quote
Lucii Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 URGH! Somebody hand me that bleeding gun so I can shoot him! Can't believe he did that to her again urfgeyhdyhdry Brax to save the day! then Grant can be locked up forever or be made to die a really really slow painful death P.S I don't blame you're friend! I think I would have cried too Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 I hate Grant ... he's sick ... and now I'm terrified for Charlie ... I hope she'll be okay ... Brilliantly written and I look forward to more. Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted September 14, 2011 Report Posted September 14, 2011 (edited) WOW that is all I have to say Naaa did I fool you that was one high full driven fast paced whopper of a chapter Hopefully Grant's gun jammed or something surely you wouldn't kill charlie would you? The next chapter looks good I am really looking forward to what you could mean by this part As the police close in, Grant takes matters into his own hands Edited September 14, 2011 by pembie Quote
Samantha28 Posted September 14, 2011 Report Posted September 14, 2011 Woooow!! Great chapter!!! Grant.. How could he do that to her again?! Poor Charlie... Looking forward to more! Quote
Inactive User Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Amazing chapter Glad Ruby told Colleen off. That old woman is gonna never learn, eh? I bet Colleen will feel guilty for opening her mouth after she hears what happens to Charlie... Hope it's no one who is shot! Please let be Grant-that disgusting scumbag! Update soon xxx Quote
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