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Glad Charlie's ok Hope she let's people help her with the rape thing through hopefully Bianca will help her through it

As always very well written sad that it is ending but look forward to see how you finish this story off :D

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Great update!

Bianca and Charlie's talk was great, it's nice that she has so many people who care :)

Charlie wouldnt take Brax's hand :( Though I do understand why. Poor girl :(

Update soon :)

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Great chapter! And I liked the ending. :D

Can't believe it's over really! :( But thank you for sharing it with us. Soph :) It had been such a great one we ever had enjoyed reading it. :) Can't wait to read another new fanfic from you soon in the future *hugs* xx

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I've really enjoyed your fic! It's been really beautiful!!

I hope you decide to write another!!

Great ending. btw. Absolutely adored that last bit - would've loved to read more of it :)

Looking forward to more!!!

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That was a great ending, you wrapped up everything up well and ended it all on a positive note with Charlie, Ruby and Brax all moving on with their lives and in a happy place.Thanks for sharing!

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LOVED that chapter, most especially .........

 “So should we wait a while before going to see her?” Ruby asked disappointedly, and Bianca smiled sympathetically and nodded. She smiled at the rest of Charlie’s family, before making her exit.

 “Am I really that scary that nobody else is brave enough to come in?” Charlie wondered out loud, and Brax chuckled slightly.

“Well their theory was that if you shoot the messenger, then at least I’m the only one getting hurt,”

 “I don’t know exactly what it was that she said, but when she was speaking it made me realise that when I did shut everyone out the first time – I didn’t feel any better for doing it. In fact I probably felt worse. And so it made me realise, I don’t ever want to feel like that I again, and the only way to do that is to not push people away,”

 “Just because you’re in that hospital bed doesn’t mean that I won’t tickle you until you tell me,” Brax warned her.

Charlie grinned back at him coyly. “Well, I’m pretty sure that on our first date, I did mention something about allowing you the pleasure of going on fourteen more dates with me, so…” Charlie trailed off as Brax smiled, and gently took her face in his hands and kissed her softly.

 Ruby had stayed at home originally, but after a while moved into an apartment in the city to be closer to Uni. Charlie had been sad to see her go at first, but understood that it was something that Ruby needed to do. And besides, Ruby quickly appeased her mother by promising to come over for dinner every Sunday

 Brax looked up again at Charlie who was on the phone to Ruby. Once Ruby had found out that Charlie was pregnant, she had insisted on phoning about five times a day, just to make sure that Charlie was alright……………….

………and the REALLY cute ending !!!!!!!

I’ve waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay enjoyed raiding this fic !!!!!!!

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Aww that was a brilliant ending! Chax all happy with a babba on the way and he's all set to propose :wub: Loved the line about Ruby phoning 5 times a day :lol:

Brilliant fiction, well done.

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