Danni02 Posted July 22, 2011 Report Posted July 22, 2011 Aw that was a nice little update. Kinda funny that they are both the centre of gossip right now......glad they are sorting it all out and are going to keep meeting. Update soon Quote
totally Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 I love this fanfic so much! Thank you, that was an awesome update. Can't wait to read more! Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Fantastic update I really like the cheeky comments Ruby keeps making, they make me laugh. It's good, she and Charlie are so close now. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon xx Quote
Inactive User Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Great chapter Glad Charlie and Ruby are close (wondering how Jenny and Mark's dealing with it all e.g. that their adoptive daughter and her birth mother are growing closer...) Loved Ruby's cheeky comments Update soon please xx Quote
elikell Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Loved it, as usual! Ruby was just too funny here. She's certainly changed since the start of this fic. All her comments were classic. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please Quote
callyha Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Oh My God! For some strange reason, I haven't commented on ANY chapter! I thought I had done. Chapter 1: I love the start and how you've got Charlie 'running away', and how you've introduced her with her past still very much plaguing her. Oooh! Brax has noticed her already! Chapter 2: I was thinking that the rude girl was Ruby -And I was right! Brax! I just love him (So will Charlie to I hope ) Chapter 3: I loved how Brax wanted to comfort Charlie -but couldn't and how the women wanted to help to. Martha! Been judgmental -that doesn't surprise me! Glad Jenny isn't telling anyone and that she put Martha back into place Chapter 4: Great idea to have each characters reactions when they get home and are with their partners. I felt for Mark when he was worrying that Charlie wanted Ruby back. Ruby overheard! I do feel for her Chapter 5: I just love Brax and how he wants to comfort Charlie. And I did love: Quote "Why are you crying?" he asked. "I'm not crying" Charlie replied quickly, but her voice broke halfway through. Brax raised his eyebrows. Charlie sighed. "Ok, fine. I'm crying. Happy?" she asked. "No. Why are you crying?" Brax inquired further. He knew he probably shouldn't push it, but the truth was, even though he had only just met Charlie, he already cared about her and wanted to help her if he could. Charlie smiled slightly "You don't give up easily do you?". Brax shook his head. "So you gonna tell me why you're crying?" Charlie looked at Brax "Why do you care so much? You only just met me" she pointed out. Brax shrugged slightly - to be honest he wasn't sure himself really. "Because you're hot when you smile". This statement caused Charlie to burst out laughing. Brax smiled at this. "Now stop avoiding the question" he told her. Awkward on the beach at that last part.... Chapter 6: Great chapter! didn't see that slap coming! I can see why Ruby felt the need to slap Charlie, but poor Charlie! Now thinking history is going to repeat itself! Ooh, and Brax at the end...Maybe he will chase after Charlie...... Chapter 7: Jack and Brax more concerned with Charlie than they are Ruby! -Love it! No Ruby, That didn't work the way you wanted it to! Brax comforting Charlie <3 Chapter 8: Great chapter! I'm glad Charlie went around to Ruby's house to explain everything, and that Ruby was able to figure it out for herself, I don't think Charlie really wanted to say the word rape. Chapter 9: Brax got through to Ruby! Its what she needed, walk a mile in someone else's shoes Ruby! It helps! Now Charlie and Ruby are at an understanding! Yey, its what they both need Chapter 10: I loved this chapter! Ruby isn't angry anymore, and Charlie and Ruby are making progress! And that last bit- sooooo SWEET! Chapter 11: It seems nothing will wipe the smiles off Charlie and Ruby's faces -why should it?? Ruby fearing rejection if Charlie didn't go back, -I can see why she would think this, but at the same time, I don't think Charlie will want to loose Ruby for a second time, not after everything. Chapter 12: It seems like Charlie and Ruby are now mum and daughter.....the banter between the two, the laughing -how sweet! Brax asking Charlie out!!!!!!!! LOVE!!!! And Ruby helping Charlie to choose something to wear >< Quote "Thanks" she told him. Charlie turned to Ruby who still had a sly look on her face. "I'll deal with you later" she told Ruby who pouted angelically. she turned back to Brax who was looking at the pair of them, with an amused look on his face. "Shall we go?" she asked Brax who nodded and took Charlie's arm. They had walked about 10 steps away from the caravan, when they heard Ruby shout "You better not get up to any funny business, I want you home by 12 - you have work tomorrow". Charlie stopped and called over her shoulder "Good night Ruby". Charlie could hear Ruby cackling as she walked off. Charlie turned back to Brax who was trying not to laugh. "Are you sure she's not the mother?" Brax chuckled, and Charlie couldn't help but chuckle also. "Shall we go?" Brax asked. Charlie nodded, and the pair set off, both enjoying each others company already This made me laugh! I'm really enjoying reading this! Keep it up! Quote
Angel90 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Loved this chapter and the bonding... Cant wait to see how the date turnis out... Liked Brax's gulp when he saw Charlie that was cute... Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 I loved that chapter. It was so brilliantly written. I love the charcater interaction. & Charlie & Ruby's relationship is really lovely too. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Posted July 24, 2011 Glad that Charlie and Ruby are getting on now, love both their reactions to Charlie getting a date. Quote
pembie Posted July 25, 2011 Report Posted July 25, 2011 Sorry I somehow missed this update Really funny chapter loved Ruby telling Charlie not to stay out all night and that she had work tomorrow made me laugh update again soon Quote
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