Danni02 Posted August 9, 2011 Report Posted August 9, 2011 Great update. Nice that Charlie and Ruby are going to live together. Update soon Quote
Chickiboomxx Posted August 9, 2011 Report Posted August 9, 2011 Sorry, I thought I had already commented. Great chapter! It's nice that Ruby and Charlie are going to live together Looking forward to more. Please update soon xxx Quote
totally Posted August 9, 2011 Report Posted August 9, 2011 Thank you for this! I love how Ruby and Charlie's relationship develops into a real mother-daugther one. I only hope Charlie lets Brax in. It is not because she needs to take care of Ruby that she can't be with him. Well written! I'm looking forward to read more! Quote
soph1303 Posted August 14, 2011 Report Posted August 14, 2011 Sorry I know I haven't updated in ages. But I lost my USB which had all my finished chapters for this fanfiction on it . So now I have to rewrite them, which means it might be a few days before I update the next chapter, sorry xx Quote
Lucii Posted August 14, 2011 Report Posted August 14, 2011 Gosh I'm sorry for not commenting sooner! I love Charlie and Ruby's relationship and thewy lvie together it's just too sweet Charlie and Brax Looking forward to the next chapter xx Quote
JosieTash Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 ADORING this fic !!!!!!!!!!!…… sooo many great moments in this latest chapter .,…. “Ruby can you please just drop it!” Charlie snapped, and Ruby looked surprised; whilst Ruby had certainly yelled at Charlie quite a few times, Charlie had never lost her temper with Ruby. Charlie’s hand flew to her mouth. “I’m so sorry Ruby” Charlie apologized, and Ruby smiled to show that she was forgiven. “It’s just that...” Charlie trailed off, not wanting to get into a discussion with Ruby about why she had ended things with Brax. “Are you serious? My brother and your mum are dating? My brother is dating a copper?” Heath snorted loudly. Ruby nodded, and Heath wiped tears of laughter away from his eyes. “Oh that’s priceless” Heath chortled. “I’m so sorry, I’ll rephrase that shall I? Are you having copper troubles?” Heath cackled, before Brax tipped Heath off of the sofa. Charlie sighed. “Its not that I wouldn’t be able to. It’s just that I’m new to being a mum. I’m still learning all that stuff. And I’m actually getting better at it, and I don’t want my being in a relationship to jeopardize that” Ruby looked at Charlie in astonishment. “But you are a good mum” Ruby told Charlie, still sounding surprised Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 I love how you portray Ruby and Charlie's relationship in this story. It's written so beautifully. Well done and I really look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 Glad Charlie told Ruby the truth about her break-up with Brax.Heath winding Brax up about dating a cop was well written. Quote
Inactive User Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 Loved it. Liked how you wrote Charlie and Ruby's relationship so well Update soon xx Quote
elikell Posted August 17, 2011 Report Posted August 17, 2011 A wonderful update. You've written this so well, with the emotions just right for the characters. I'm glad that Charlie told Ruby the truth about the break-up. And who knows, maybe there's something that'll happen soon. Loved Ruby admitting that she thought Charlie was a good mum Interesting preview. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please Quote
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