Shezza Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 OMG I hope someone finds Charlie soon. I wonder who it is going to be??? Great Update I hope you update really really soon the suspense is killing me
Danni02 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 Oh poor Charlie trying to call but no-one answer her. And then Bianca I hope she gets found soon!
JosieTash Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 LOVING it, most especially ....... "Can you two get a room please" Ruby announced her entrance into the kitchen with a sentence she's been over using for the past couple of weeks. "We have and we've chosen the kitchen" I replied. "No Charlie, you made your bed now lie in it. I got dragged into this mess, made a false alibi and had to lie to the man that I love. I can't just forgive that at a whim. Maybe if you wasn't so quick to drop you knickers for Daryl Braxton your life wouldn't be such a mess now and you'd probably feel competent to actually stay in your job instead of running away to the city with your river boy." Your annoyed that Liam found out that you yet again dropped your knickers for Heath Braxton. You talk about me but at least I can say I love Brax. You used Heath even though you still loved Liam and knew it hurt him you being with him. What would you call that. You know what I feel sorry for Liam, first it was Vittoria then Heath. Don't judge me Bianca when your no better. I never forced you to make that statement so stop blaming me and start taking responsibility as well." As I lay on the floor I try to think but all I can feel is this searing pain running through me. My eyes start to cloud with tears as the pain becomes too much for me to handle. I reach for my phone in my pocket and dial 000 as the operator asks my emergency I can't vocalise a response and my vision starts to blur. The operator probably thinking it’s a prank call says to stop being perverted with my heavy breathing and stop ringing and that there are people with emergencies that need to come though then the line goes dead. I would find it funny if my situation wasn’t so severe.
soph1303 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 OMG loving this story!!!! As soon as I read that first line in the first update it made me think of the all that i want Chax promo that was on Tv, so I'm guessing you saw that too! So glad that Charlie said to Bianca because she was completely right - Charlie never made the decision to get Bianca to lie and its not like Bianca's perfect either!! OMG!! Charlie was trying to get help and Bianca hung up on her!!! In fact nobody that she has called has answered/tried to save her!! I bet Bianca will hate herself when she finds out that she could have killed Charlie by hanging up on her and leaving her to bleed on the kitchen floor!! Hope she's ok !! I wonder who finds her??!! More soon please, the suspense is killing me !!
suz22 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 Good start, I wonder how close this will be to the actual episode. Hope they're gonna end up staying in the bay and not moving to the city, and I hope Charlie survives!! You wouldn't kill her, would you?? Can't wait for the next chapter
faith406 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 Part 3 8:30pm - 8 and half hours later I'd never really thought how slow time could go but as I lay on the floor fighting to keep my eyes open I realise that this may just be it. Murdered in my home by the brother of the man I killed to save the man I love and also my life as well. Thinking of Ruby I try to hold on but I start to feel a heavy feeling weighing on me. As my eyes start to close again I hear footsteps and a scream from a female sounding like Ruby. Then I hear his voice, Brax telling Casey to get Ruby away that she doesn't need to see me like this. I feel is hand on my face as he tells me I'm going to be fine and to keep hanging on. "Ja Ja" I try to say to him but I feel like I'm ready to shut down completely. "Don't try talk baby, just keep fighting" I can hear Brax saying, I think he's crying as a few tears drop onto my cheeks. I need him to know it was Jake, he'll be coming for Brax next and if I don't make it, I need to know Brax will be safe. That’ll he will be around for Ruby. With all the strength I can muster I finally get it out. "It was Jake" As my words hit him I see his face contort in anger. I hear Casey's voice shouting at Brax that the ambos are going to be at least 30 minute to get here. "She can't wait that long, get the car." Brax shouted at Casey. "Baby I'm so sorry this might hurt but I need to get you in the car okay." I nod in response to Brax as he lessens the pressure to my wound and picks me up. "Oh ****" I hear Heath say as Brax takes me outside to the car. "Darcy get in the car with Ruby. Casey take my car bring them to the hospital, I'll drive Braxs." "What's Darcy doing here, she doesn't need to see this." I heard Brax say as he safely got me in the car. "Casey called, I couldn't leave her in the house on her own." Charlie at the beach The sun felt nice and warm on my skin, I stretched my feet out into the warm sand. I could make out a little baby with someone I assumed to be their mother near the water. They looked so happy together by the water. Braxs Car "CHARLIE! CHARLIE! Stay with me hey. You got to keep your eyes open ok." All I could do with slightly nod my head at Brax in agreement as I tried to stay lucid. As he stroked my face Brax babbled on about letting me win and how he had order the furniture for the new house that I had wanted. "You got to stay awake, keep fighting for me, for Ruby. Our new start is going to start soon." The rest of the journey consisted of Brax talking about the future and the things we were going to do. There was suddenly a jerk as Heath stopped the car. Suddenly I was back in Braxs arm as he carried me into the hospital screaming for help. Suddenly everything went black.
Danni02 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 Awesome update. So glad someone found Charlie, but it must have been awful for them! Really hope she is okay!
luscious01 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 OMG that was amazing update soon please xx
cb2180 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 Just read all 3 chapters really good can't wait for update
Shezza Posted November 15, 2011 Report Posted November 15, 2011 Wow What a chapter I hope Charlie survives I am loving this story and I can't wait for more. Please update really soon
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