ldscott Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Great chapter, love the banter between charlie and Heath! Can't wait to find out who the mystery person is! Lisa x
faith406 Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Thanks for the comments ldscott and JarlieFanEver. This updates not that long but hope you enjoy. Chapter 29 “I said what the hell are you doing here?” Charlie repeated with more venom in her voice “I….. I um…. I’m working on a case at the moment and I just I wanted to…. I needed to come and see you. I’m so sorry for what happened” “Shut up, just shut up. You’re sorry…. YOU’RE SORRY!! Do you think that makes everything alright?” “I know it doesn’t make up for what happened but I am so sorry for my part in this” “You helped let that monster out; you may as well have pulled the trigger yourself” Charlie screamed ------------------------------------------------------------------- Reaching the cemetery Casey took Ruby’s hand in a sign of support as they made their way towards the two headstones for Elsie and Ross Buckton. Along the drive Ruby had become very quiet and deep in thought, Casey felt it best to leave her to her thoughts as they made their way to the city. Now that they had finally made it to their destination Casey decided it would be best to let Ruby take the lead. As they got to the graves Ruby kneeled down as she took the old flowers away and replaced them with the news ones they had bought on the way. As she sat tidying up the graves Casey knelt down beside her. “I don’t really know what to say……. Sorry I haven’t been up recently things have just been really crazy. Mum told me that you helped her to keep fighting. Thank you” Ruby said as tears came to her eyes, taking a deep breath she continued on “I don’t know what I would of done if I had lost her, it was hard enough all the waiting and hoping that we’d get her back. I miss you guys so much, but I know you’re with me and mum everyday watching over us. I love you both so much.” Ruby and Casey just sat in silence, Casey waiting for Ruby’s next move not wanting to rush her. Ruby had thoughts of her life running through her head she hadn’t always been the most well behaved child be she always had her family there loving her and protecting her. Angelo’s As Brax finished taking some drinks orders he went out to the balcony area to help clear the plates from a small party of people who were celebrating a promotion. “Hey Brax” Liam called as he made his way to his boss Halting his way to the balcony Brax turned to see what he wanted “Yeah!” “I wanted to ask if I could pick up a few extra shifts, it’s just with the wedding and all a bit of extra money would be good” “I don’t see why not, Jason’s going to the city for a while his dad’s not well so check the roster for next week and let me know which shifts you can pick up” “Cool, thanks Brax. Hey I bumped into Charlie earlier; she’s looks like she’s doing well” “Yeah, she’s taking each day as it comes but things have definably settled down a bit now” “Well I’m glad to hear it; you both deserve some happiness after all you’ve been through” “Thanks mate, well I better get back to it” Brax said as he went to the balcony to clear the plates. As Brax got outside he started to help to tidy the mess from the party. As he cleared some plates something in the distance caught his eye, looking on he saw Charlie looking very agitated as he moved forward to get a better look a rush of anger came over him as he saw who she was talking to. Putting down the plates Brax rushed out of the restaurant and towards the beach. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ “Please if you would just let me explain” “No explanation you could give me will make up for what you have done so just leave me alone” “Please if we could sit down and talk, I feel so bad if I had known things would have turned out the way they did I…..” “You what, you wouldn’t of helped him? You knew exactly what he was like but you chose to help him so don’t give me that crap” At that moment they both turned to the sound of a man shouting in their direction. “HEY!!! Hey you stay away from her do you hear me” Brax shouted as he ran up to where they were standing on the beach, as he got to Charlie he placed himself protectively around her. “Brax please, I just came to explain. I heard what happened and I was in town for a case. I feel so bad about what Jake did” “What your still practicing law, you should be locked up. Nothing you can say will make up for you helping that scum” “I know but I want to at least try” “Well we don’t care so just get out of here Hayley” “Please” Hayley said as she moved forward to Brax and reached her hand out “Don’t you EVER touch me. You stay away from us do you hear me” Brax said as he pointed at her. Taking Charlie’s hand he lead her in the direction of Angelo’s leaving Hayley standing on the beach. Charlie let Brax lead her up to the restaurant, not being able to understand what Hayley could possibly want to say to her. Nothing could make what happened okay, she had got shot almost lost her life and lost her and Brax’s baby. Nothing was ever going to make what happened okay.
Inactive User Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Great chapter Ohh it's Hayley! Hope she stays away from Chax! More soon please xx
faith406 Posted September 3, 2012 Report Posted September 3, 2012 Hope you enjoy. Got a rough outline for next chapter just need to write, hopefully I will have it up by the end of the week. Chapter 30 As Brax and Charlie got to the surf club entrance Charlie pulled on Brax’s hand to release his grip. Turning at the sudden loss of contact Brax faced Charlie. “I…. I don’t want to go up there, I just want to go back to the house” Charlie said to Brax “Okay, let me get my things and I’ll go with you” Brax said not wanting Charlie to be alone “I’m a big girl Brax I can go by myself” Charlie snapped “Sorry, I didn’t mean that how it sounded. Brax I just need to be alone right now” Brax pulled Charlie into his arms and kissed her head. “Okay but let me know when you get in and that you’re ok” “I will” Charlie said as she walked away Angelos “Hey mate what was all that about on the beach?” Liam asked as Brax entered the restaurant and watched his friends pour himself a glass of bourbon and gulp it down. “Nothing” Brax replied pouring himself another glass “It didn’t look like nothing” “That chick she’s bad news that’s all, look I don’t really want to talk about it. I’ll be in the office if anyone needs me” Brax said as he took the glass and bottle of bourbon into his office. Sitting in his office Brax poured himself another glass of bourbon angry that Hayley was back. Nothing she could say would make up for her part in all this mess. Why show her face at all, Brax wanted her to leave because deep in his core he wasn’t sure he would be able to hold back his anger. Drinking another shot Brax heard some commotion coming from outside, getting up he went to check what it was. Walking from his office into the restaurant Brax saw the back of Liam talking with a raised voice. “Look I’m not looking for any trouble, but you need to leave. Now is not a good time” Liam said firmly “I just want to talk to him so get out of my way” Recognising the voice Brax rushed forward pulling Hayley by her upper arm “You just don’t give up do you, get out of here now” Brax said dragging her to the exit Pushing him off Hayley lost her footing and fell onto the floor “Hey hey Brax back off” Liam said as he went to help her up from the floor “Brax please listen to me, I need to explain.” Hayley pleaded as she got up Brax lunged forward going for her again but Liam stepped in his way. “Hey miss I think you should listen to him and go” Liam said hoping the situation didn’t escalate “Not until her hears me out” Hayley said trying to stand her ground but also feeling scared At her words Brax snapped and picked up a bottle of wine from one of the tables and threw it against the wall very close to Hayley, close enough to scare her but not close enough to hurt her. “Get the hell out of here” Brax shouted. Hayley jumped back out the sheer force of Brax’s rage and hurried out of the surf club bumping into people. “Brax what the hell” Liam said as he looked at Brax surprised by his actions “Not now Liam, just leave it” Brax said once again retreating into his office Pulling out his phone Liam called the one person he knew could calm Brax and that probably knew what was going on. The rage and anger Brax displayed was something Liam had never seen before and he was afraid about what he might do next. Scared that he may snap and decide to go after the blond women that just scurried out of the restaurant shaking and scared. Diner “Hey Leah, you busy?” Charlie asked as she stood at the counter in the diner. “For you I can spare a few minutes” Leah said walking out from behind the counter and guiding Charlie to a table at the back of the diner. “What’s up, you seem upset” Leah asked “Just bumped into someone I wasn’t expecting to see again, it just shook me up. It brought back everything, just when I feel like I’m moving forward and taking each day as it comes something just makes me fall right back” Leah took Charlie’s hand in hers and clasped it trying to give her friend some comfort. “Does that ache ever go, it’s gotten better. You know the pain its lessened but I can still feel it. Is the loss of a baby something you can ever truly get over?” “You learn to go on, you learn to live after it….. I really don’t know what to tell you Charlie. You know the loss is such a painfully profound feeling, we both do from experience but it does get better. I still think of the two babies I lost, it affected my life so much and was so painful to go through emotionally, physically and mentally but I got through it and so will you. Just give it time, and don’t shut the ones you love and who love you out” “Thank you” Charlie said as she wiped a tear from her eye “No need to say thank you, I didn’t do anything” “Yeah you did, your words you just being here for me it really means a lot Leah” “Whenever you need me I’m here, always anytime okay” Charlie nodded as she pulled Leah into a hug. As Charlie phone started to ring they pulled apart as she picked it up and took the call. Hanging up Charlie turned to Leah “Thanks for the talk, I’ve got to go something’s up with Brax” “Do you want me to come with you?” Leah asked concerned “Thanks for the offer but I’ll be alright on my own. Thanks again for the chat” “Like I said before anytime, what are friends for” Leah said as they embraced and then went their separate ways. Angelo’s Walking into the restaurant Charlie felt glass under her shoes, as she looked to the floor she followed the spill of red wine from the glass to the red liquid that stained the wall. Spotting Liam Charlie walked towards him. “What happened?” Charlie asked “Exactly what I said on the phone, that blond women I saw you guys arguing with on the beach she came back up her to speak to Brax. She wouldn’t go and he dragged her to the exit to get her out, she tripped I helped her up but she kept trying to speak to him and that’s when he snapped and threw the bottle against the wall near her. Charlie he was so angry, I’m so sorry to trouble you but I called you just in case he decided to go after her” “Liam it’s alright, you did the right thing calling me” Charlie said as she walked towards Brax’s office. Taking a deep breath she pushed the handle down to open the door. “Get out” Brax said not looking at who had decided to enter the office “Charming” Charlie said as she entered the room and closed the door Pouring himself another glass Brax looked up. “Didn’t expect it to be you” Brax replied “Obviously” “So what Liam call you I take it” “He was worried you would go after Hayley and do something stupid” “That’s not such a bad idea” Brax replied after taking another gulp of bourbon “What like throwing the bottle of wine?” “It was a better alternative to what I wanted to do” “Which was?” “You really don’t want to know” Brax replied “I wouldn’t off asked so go ahead and answer the question” “I wanted to grab her and hurt her the way she hurt you, the way she hurt us. I wanted to make her feel how you must of felt laying there dying” Brax told her as tears came to his eyes. “I am so angry, I see her and I just want to hurt her for her part in all this. She helped that monster” “I know Brax but you can’t behave like this, you’ve got to find a way to keep a hold of your anger while she’s in town” “It’s not that easy Charlie……. You know what just leave please I need some space” “No I’m not going anywhere” she stubbornly replied “Fine then I’ll go” Brax said getting up from his chair and making his way to the door. Seeing his movement Charlie backed herself up against the door to block Brax’s exit “Move” Brax told Charlie as he faced her “No! Just listen to me for a minute please. I know it’s hard, I feel angry to but Brax you can’t act on your anger because you’ll get taken away from me and I’ll be on my own. You do something to her and I lose you, I can’t….. I won’t be able to deal with that. I can’t lose you as well. Please Brax I can’t lose you, I need you here with me not locked up somewhere” Charlie said as she started to get hysterical Placing his hands on either side of her head Brax tried to calm her. “Charlie please you need to calm down” “No Brax I am so scared of losing you, I can’t help it. Look at what happened today at the restaurant, what’s to say next time you act on your anger and actually hurt her” Charlie asked as she looked into Brax’s eyes tears streaming from her eyes “If she’s stupid enough to approach me again then I will remember this…. this moment. The look in your eyes right now, I won’t do anything that means I get taken away from you Charlie” “You get so angry Brax what if it’s not enough to stop you” “I want her to feel as much pain as you felt and then some. Finding you like that on the floor in a pool of your blood, those days, weeks waiting to see if you would come back to me and everything else that happened I have never felt so helpless and scared. I felt like my future was slowly slipping away from me and there was nothing I could do. I would sit and hold your hand and just wish you to come back to me. I would look at you and think what were you thinking as you laid there no one coming to help you, I hated that you had to go through that, the helplessness and fear. I want her to suffer I want her to feel pain, seeing her makes my blood boil but I won’t hurt her not now, seeing you like this………. because I don’t want to cause you any pain, she’s not worth being taken away from you. I love you too much to let that happen okay.” At Charlie’s nod of her head Brax kissed her and puller her into a hug holding onto her. “Do you need to be here?” Charlie asked Brax “Not really, why?” “Casey and Ruby should be back from the city by now, how about we grab some pizzas and go home” “Sounds like a plan. Charlie are we okay?” Brax asked “Yeah, this afternoon threw me, it threw the both of us but we’re going to be alright. I love you and I won’t let anything try to separate us again.” Charlie said as she leaned up to kiss Brax Braxton House Has Charlie and Brax enter the house with Pizzas they’re greeted with the sounds of Darcy, VJ, Casey and Ruby playing video games in the front room. “Hey guys” Brax said as he walked thorugh to the kitchen with the pizzas. Looking to Ruby, Charlie asked “Hey, how was the city?” “It was good, glad I went I think I needed to you know” Ruby said as she got up and went to follow Charlie into the kitchen. As they stood Brax could tell they wanted to speak with an audieince so excused himself to go to the living room. “I’m sensing you want to say something?” Charlie said as she looked at the look on her daughters face “I’m pretty lucky you know” Ruby said looking at her mum “Um I’m a bit lost here” “I’ve been thinking lately about everything, my life. You’ve always been there to protect me even when I fought against you, you never gave up on me. I didn’t really realise just how much until everything that’s happened I’m lucky to have you as my mum. Its true that we take things, people for granted and we don’t know what we’ve got till its gone. I didn’t really fully understand what I had till you had gone but I was lucky to get a second chance” Ruby said as she put her arms around her mums body “I love you” Charlie said as she kissed her daughter on top of her head ------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Hey Case, where did you and Ruby go today?” Brax asked sensing it had something to do with the talk that was going on in the kitchen as they sat in the living room watching Darcy and VJ play against each other on the x box. “She wanted to go visit her Grandparents graves” Casey replied “How was she?” Brax asked “She was quiet on the way up, abit upset at the graves but I think it did her good to go talk to them. Why?” “I was just wondering” Brax replied “So we eating those pizzas you brought in or were they just for decoration” Casey asked as his stomach rumbled “Less of the cheek or you can starve, I’ll go get them” Brax said as he got up to go get them from the kitchen Has Brax entered the kitchen he was greeted by the sight of Charlie and Ruby in an embrace. “Sorry to interrupt just want to get the pizzas” Brax said “No you’re alright, was Casey moaning about me hungry?” Ruby asked “Yep” replied Brax “He’s been saying he’s hungry for the past hour” Ruby said laughing going to get some plates from the cupboard and putting them on the table “VJ, Darcy pause the game and come get some pizza” Brax shouted out to them as it open up the pizza boxes and put them on the table. “Ummmmmm is that pizza I can smell” Heath said as he walked through the door “Heath you always seem to appear when there’s food” Ruby said laughing “Hey little Buckton I’ll have you know I just have perfect timing” Heath replied as he walked straight to the table and picked up a slice of pizza ---------------------------------------------------------------- Going into the bedroom she shared with Brax, Charlie pulled out her phone and dialled a number for a company in the city. “Hello, I’m looking for representation for my brothers case I was referred by a friend to your firm. More precisely I was told to ask for Hayley O’conner.” “Oh she’s away on a case, is there a contact number she can be reached on so I can call her to discuss my case” “Thank you very much, hang on let me just get pen and paper.” “Thanks for your help” Charlie said after taking down the number. As she ended the call she went to type a text message. Okay I’ll hear what you have to say. Meet me tomorrow morning 9am in the surf club parking lot. Charlie.
Inactive User Posted September 4, 2012 Report Posted September 4, 2012 Great chapter. Ohhh Charlie wants to see Hayley...?? Looking forwards to see how it goes. Update soon please xx
Arielxo Posted September 4, 2012 Report Posted September 4, 2012 Ive missed this story so much! So glad your updating again. Looking forward to more
faith406 Posted October 31, 2012 Report Posted October 31, 2012 I really do hope I still have some readers left, here’s the next chapter. Thanks for bearing with me and my sporadic updates. Hope you enjoy xxx Chapter 31 Sitting at the table in the kitchen Charlie sat with a cup of coffee which she was yet to drink. Thinking about the meeting she was about to have with a women she didn’t much care for. “Mum can I borrow your car today?” Ruby asked upon entering the kitchen Jolted out of her thoughts Charlie looked up to her daughter “Sorry Rubes I need it today” she replied “Okay no worries, off anywhere nice?” “Just going to run a few errands after I go for a run” “Oh well can I borrow it while your off on your run, I just need to move a few things from the attic at Leah’s” “Ruby I said no okay, we’ll do that later on.” Charlie snapped at Ruby “Umm okay” Ruby said taken aback by Charlie’s tone “Look I’m sorry I didn’t get much sleep yesterday. I’m gonna drive the car into town; I don’t want to waste time coming back here to get it. Just going to take my stuff and have a shower at the surf club after I’m done working out.” “It’s okay, it can wait. Don’t overdo things, maybe you should take it easy today” “I’ll be alright, I’ll see you later on I need to get going” Charlie said as she got up to leave Ruby watched her mum feeling like something else was going on but couldn’t quite figure out what it could be. ----------------------------------------------------------------- Charlie POV As I drove into the surf club car park I could see Hayley standing by her car, not wanting to get out I reversed the car so that I could make a quick exit without anyone seeing me. “Get in” I said once I had pulled up near her and wound down the window “Where are we going” She asked me “Somewhere private to talk, look get in or your chance is gone” I said hoping she would get in before anyone noticed me and her talking. I let out a silent sigh of relief as she pulled open the door and got in. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Braxton House “Hey, where’s Charlie?” Brax asked Ruby as he walked into the kitchen “She’s gone for a run” she replied “Oh ok, do you know when she’s going to be back?” “Nope, she said she had some errands to run. What you up to today?” “Just going into Angelos, why?” “I need to move some stuff from Leah’s loft, I asked mum but she kinda snapped at me then said she’d do it later on. I don’t know why but she seemed kinda stressed so I’d rather get it done without stressing her out about it again” “I think I know what might be the problem” “Okay, go on” Ruby asked curious “You remember Hayley?” “Casey’s lawyer?” “Yeah” “Well she’s in the bay on a case, we saw her yesterday. She tried to apologise for representing Jake and getting him out of jail” “Wow, how did mum handle seeing her?” “She wasn’t happy about it, we both weren’t. Nothing she can say will ever make it ok. I’ll talk to Charlie about it when I see her; I don’t want Hayley’s reappearance to set Charlie back” “No neither do I” Ruby said “Hey how bout you come with me to Angelo’s and help me with my stock take then we can move the stuff from the attic after” “Sounds like a plan, thanks Brax” Ruby said getting up and going to get ready Abandoned Block “Why are we here” Hayley asked Charlie following her into the abandoned building. It was all grotty and dirty which made Hayley feel a bit uneasy. All through the car ride Charlie remained focused with her eyes on the road not saying a single word. “Like I told you before to talk, isn’t that what you wanted to do?” Charlie replied walking to a particular room. She’d confronted a nightmare from her past here; if she could do that then she could do this. Walking into the room she was assaulted with the memory of Grant finally letting his true colours show, all she wanted all she needed was for her daughter to believe her. For her to know that she was telling the truth and that he was as evil as she said he was. She’d do anything to keep him away from her daughter and right now she’d do anything to get this woman out of their lives because she wasn’t willing to lose Brax. His anger the other day, what he may have done if there weren’t people in the restaurant, if Liam wasn’t there to be a voice of reason. She’d lost too much to lose him because of this woman. “Yeah but…….” “Look let’s just get this over and done with, say what you have to say” Charlie said getting impatient ----------------------------------------------------------------- Angelo’s Heath had finished his surf and made his way up to the surf club. Seeing his brother’s Ute parked in the car park he decided to go up to Angelo’s. “Hey little Buckton” Heath said as he saw Ruby counting stuff in crates. “Hi Heath” she said still looking down not wanting to lose count “I see my brother’s putting you to work, where is he?” “Just getting some papers from his office” “You two missed some good waves this morning” Heath said “Yeah well some of us have to work” Brax said as he came into the main part of the restaurant. “Well maybe you should get up earlier then, take a leaf out of your women’s book” “Yeah well Charlie’s always been an early riser, especially for her morning runs. She was up early this morning” Ruby replied “Well she wasn’t out for a run” replied Heath “What’d you mean?” asked Brax “I saw her this morning with that Hayley chick” Heath replied “You what, when?” said Brax surprised “This morning when I was going in for my surf, Hayley was in the car park when Charlie pulled up and then they said a few words then Hayley got in and they drove off.” “I thought you said mum was upset about her being in town” Ruby asked confused “She was” said Brax “Then why is she with her” “I don’t know” Brax replied pulling out his phone and calling Charlie ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Abandoned Block “Aren’t you going to answer that?” asked Hayley Pulling out her phone Charlie looked at the name flashing on her screen debating whether to pick it up. “Hey” Charlie said picking up “Hi, where are you?” Brax asked getting straight to the point “I thought Ruby would of told you, I just got a few errands to do today” “How was your run?” Brax asked waiting to see whether Charlie would lie or not “Yeah it was good, I’m glad to be able to do it again. Look Brax I got to go so I’ll see you later on” Charlie said hanging up before he could ask her anything else. “Why’d you lie?” Hayley asked “I don’t need to explain myself to you Hayley; it would just be easier if he didn’t know I was here right now with you. I think after yesterday even you would be able to figure that one out. Like I said before say what you have to say so we can get this over with.” ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Angelo’s “She lied” Brax said as he looked at his phone “Well that’s not her first lie of the day, she obviously didn’t want us to know she was meeting with Hayley because she lied to me this morning about going for a jog” replied Ruby “I don’t have a good feeling about this” replied Brax picking up his keys “Heath look after this place if I’m not back in time for opening. I’m going to see if I can find Charlie.” Brax said as he made his way out of the restaurant. “Brax wait up” Ruby called as she followed him to the car park “Ruby not now I need to go find your mum, she’s upset and she’s not thinking straight. I need to find her” “Brax she could be anywhere, you need to just wait and think for a second otherwise you’re going to be searching aimlessly” “Rubes she was upset when she saw her yesterday, it didn’t have a good effect on her at all. Why would she willingly let Hayley into her car, I don’t understand. Rubes is there anywhere she would go?” “I don’t know Brax” Ruby said helplessly “Think please just think, you’re Charlie and you’re upset and angry where would you go?” “Brax I’m sorry I don’t kn………..” At Rubys face Brax could see that something had come to mind “What?” Brax asked “There is a place she may have gone” “Where?” “I’d have to direct you, come on lets go” Ruby said getting into Brax’s ute. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Abandoned Block “So that’s your big apology. Did you expect me to feel sorry for you?” “No, I just wanted you to know, I had no choice but to help Jake” Hayley replied “Hayley you had a choice, you got yourself in a mess and you chose the easy way out that’s lead to this. If you had just taken responsibility for your problem…. for your addiction then we may not be here. You probably wouldn’t have been involved in all this if you hadn’t had decided to take the easy way out” “I am so sorry Charlie I really am I would have never forgiven myself if you had died” “you think that makes it better?” “No but I…………..” “Did you know I was pregnant?” Charlie said. At Hayley’s shocked expression Charlie carried on “Was being the operative word, I WAS pregnant Hayley but I’m not now. Thanks to Jake getting out of prison and coming to my home and shooting me my baby is dead. So NOTHING you say to me is going to change that.” “I swear I didn’t know Charlie, I didn’t know” Hayley said with tears coming to her eyes “Shut up just shut up, none of it matters. You still would have let him out to save your precious career; you’ve proved already the lengths you would go to in order to save it” “But he said you were a dodgy cop, and I just thought that…..” “You didn’t care whether I was or not, did you bother to dig for any information to clarify his claims” At Hayley’s silence Charlie got her answer “No I didn’t think you did. As soon as I felt myself get compromised I left the force, I handed in my resignation because I took an oath and it got compromised because of the likes of you setting up innocent men.” “It was Jake, if he never threatened me then I would never have done those things” “But you did it, you physically done it. You played your part so well Hayley you really did. Nothing you have said makes any difference to me. There’s no reason that could make it all okay so just go Hayley, I want you out of summer bay” “I can’t just leave I’m on a case” “Hayley I’m telling you right now, leave town because I cannot, I will not let Brax get into trouble because of you.” “but if I just talk to him, if I can explain” “GET OUT OF TOWN” Charlie screamed as she pulled a gun from her bag Frozen by the site of a gun being pointed at her Hayley started to shake. “Charlie just put the gun down please” Hayley said shaking “Not a nice feeling is it, having a gun pointed at you” Charlie asked trying to keep her shaking hand still. “Charlie…..” “No, it’s time for you to shut up. I don’t care what case you are on, I don’t care for your reasons for being here I want you gone do you hear me. ” “Why are you doing this, I just wanted to explain” “And you did now I asked you nicely to leave but you said no so now I am asking again.” “MUM, what are you doing?” Ruby asked as she ran into the room.
Inactive User Posted October 31, 2012 Report Posted October 31, 2012 Great chapter. Whoa at the ending! More soon pleaseee xx
Freakie42 Posted November 1, 2012 Report Posted November 1, 2012 Great chapter! Really hope you'll update soon this time
ldscott Posted December 26, 2012 Report Posted December 26, 2012 WOW! Hope Ruby manages to talk her around! Can't wait for the next update Lisa x
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