Danni02 Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 Loved that one! ‘Are we moving?’ Brax walked in after the lunch shift to find his house filled to the brim with full cardboard boxes. ‘And if we are, why did no one tell me?’ Loved that line, made me laugh. And Princess Cutie Pie! Bless little 5-year-old Charlie! Aww now Aria wants the doll. Wonder what Charlie is going to decide. Update soon Quote
Shezza Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 I loved that chapter it was light hearted and really funny. I can't wait to read more Quote
Inactive User Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 Great chapter Liked it. More soon please xx Quote
GeorgieNZ Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 Awww loved that chapter!! Really like charlies doll and how Aria wanted it and Charlie didnt want to give her up! Can't wait for next update. xx Quote
totally Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 That was so funny! Are we moving? Haha! A great Charlie and Brax scene with Heath adding that extra bit! So great! Aria wanting Charlie's doll is so cute. I love this story so much. Thank you so much for it! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Quote
Sazzle Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 Loved the humour and fun play between Brax and Charlie. Really great relationships being portrayed and enjoying the story loads. Looking forward to your next update....interesting to see what else comes out of these boxes... Quote
Kaza Posted December 9, 2011 Author Report Posted December 9, 2011 Great update!! One of my favourite fanfics!! Quote
Inactive User Posted December 9, 2011 Report Posted December 9, 2011 Awesome update! More soon please xx Quote
Danni02 Posted December 10, 2011 Report Posted December 10, 2011 Great update. Bless Charlie, it seems that she really didnt want to give up that doll! Hopefully Aria is careful with it! Oh and the pictures of her past. Loved Charlie wanting to make some real memories with Brax.... Update soon Quote
soph1303 Posted December 10, 2011 Report Posted December 10, 2011 Great two updates, Haha loved the whole Charlie/ doll part of those updates!! Heath's humour addition in the first update was awesome !! Aww felt sorry for Charlie with all the pictures from her past !! How much does Brax know about it exactly in this fic?? Cute ending !! More soon please Quote
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